Flash Fiction Friday: Unspoken Attraction

She stared into the water, her reflection the only thing looking back at her. She dipped her fingers into the cool wetness and traced the outline of her face. With her other hand her fingers combed through her long brown tresses.

She sighed deeply, then arose and walked into the nearest house, but not before he had noticed the tears glistening in her eyes.

Why was she so sad? What terrible hand had life dealt her and could someone like him ease her pain?

 

Long Way Gone by Charles Martin

I’m sorry, no poetry again today. I will do my best to bring poetry back next week.

 

I received this book Free to write a review for Harper Collins and BookLook Blogger.

Book Description

“No matter where you go, no matter whether you succeed or fail, stand or fall, no gone is too far gone. You can always come home.”

At the age of eighteen, musician and songwriter Cooper O’Connor took everything his father held dear and drove 1,200 miles from home to Nashville, his life riding on a six-string guitar and the bold wager that he had talent. But his wager soon proved foolish.

Five years after losing everything, he falls in love with Daley Cross, an angelic voice in need of a song. But just as he realizes his love for Daley, Cooper faces a tragedy that threatens his life as well as his career. With nowhere else to go, he returns home to the remote Colorado mountains, searching for answers about his father and his faith.

When Daley shows up on his street corner twenty years later, he wonders if it’s too late to tell her the truth about his past—and if he is ready to face it himself.

A radical retelling of the prodigal son story, Long Way Gone takes us from tent revivals to the Ryman Auditorium to the tender relationship between a broken man and the father who never stopped calling him home.

My Review

I never heard of Charles Martin nor read any of his books until I received Long Way Gone, but Wow, what a book. I will definitely be looking for Charles Martin’s books after reading this one. Mr. Martin created characters that were so real and I could feel their pain, their loneliness; I could dream their dreams. He also did an excellent job in describing his settings in a way that brought them to life. The story is a story of several different types of love and the power of all of them. This was the most well-written book I have read in quite some time.

I felt this book was so well written. It was intelligent and literary. I learned a lot about music and guitars from this story as well. The book has a lot of memorable quotes.

This story is a modern story that teaches an age-old lesson, and it touched my heart deeply. Three chapters from the end, tears just streamed down my face, and for me, any book that hits me with such emotion is a winner! I highly recommend this book to EVERYONE!

Oh, and one last thing, I LOVE the cover!

Top Ten Tuesday

I’m sorry this is posted late, but I certainly didn’t want to miss doing another Top Ten Tuesday. I missed last weeks because I was extremely busy and because I couldn’t come up with a list of villains anyway. Books I read don’t have what I would consider major villains, they have subtle bad guys/antagonists.

Anyway, today’s Top Ten Tuesday as suggested by The Broke and the Bookish is Top Ten Books You Read Because of Recommendation. More of my recommendations came from conversations with Bookish friends than from other blogs.

The O’Malley series by Dee Henderson was recommended to me by my good friend, Deanna, who is a Bookish friend, several years ago. It is still one of my most favorite series of books.

2. Death by Darjeeling (Tea Shop Mysteries Book 1) by [Childs, Laura]

The same friend, Deanna, who also is a tea drinker like me, also recommended The Tea Shop Mysteries series by Laura Childs. I haven’t read the entire series yet, but I do enjoy these cozy mysteries. They are light easy reads with fun characters.

3. Mr. Penumbra's 24-Hour Bookstore: A Novel by [Sloan, Robin]

My friend, Mandy, who is also a Bookish person, recommended this book to me last year.

4. 

I honestly don’t remember who recommended this book, but it was recommended to me by a homeschool mom who said it’s a fantastic book to use for geography. I think it may have been my friend, Karen. She is a wealth of great recommendations for homeschool books. Our youngest son and I read this a few years ago and loved it. We did use it for geography, but he created a whole notebook about the book that included both art and geography, as well as bits and pieces of the story.

5. Big Magic: Creative Living Beyond Fear by [Gilbert, Elizabeth]

This book was recommended by my friend, Lisa, at a writers’ retreat. I still haven’t finished reading it, but I plan to sometime. I often struggle to get through nonfiction books, but my struggle with this one is that it is too New Age for my liking.

6. 

This book was recommended to me by our church’s associate pastor because he is also a writer. I also have not finished reading this book because it takes me a while to get through technical books, but I have found a lot of value in what I have read so far. I will finish this one sometime too.

7. The Help by [Stockett, Kathryn]

This book was recommended to me by my friend, Denise. It is now one of my all time favorite books. I love the fact that it is told from the perspective of Black women in the south during the time of race/slave issues.

8. The Restoration Collection: Last Light, Night Light, True Light, Dawn's Light (A Restoration Novel) by [Blackstock, Terri]

I honestly don’t remember if this series was actually recommended to me or if I simply chose to read it because I heard a lot of talk about it at church and was intrigued, so I picked up one book after another at the library. It’s a great series and very realistic.

9. The Secret Life of Bees by [Kidd, Sue Monk]

This book was recommended to me by my sister-in-law who is a teacher. I found it quite interesting and enjoyable. In some ways the story reminded me of The Waltons.

10. 

This book was recommended to me by a homeschool friend. I really enjoyed the story and became quite fascinated with what I learned about moths in the story. However, part of the book was quite unrealistic, but I would still read it again and recommend it to others.

The Lucky One by Sherry V. Ostroff

I don’t read a lot of nonfiction, but I do love anything historical. “The Lucky One” by Sherry V. Ostroff is the story of the history of her family, her mother’s life, to be exact. Her mother grew up in Eastern Europe and she and her family were forced to move around a lot for their own safety, though, because she was a young girl, she wasn’t fully aware of the dangers. She managed to have fun and enjoy her childhood the best she could in her circumstances.

This is Sherry V. Ostroff’s first book, and she did a wonderful job keeping her mother’s original stories and voice alive in this book. The story is divided into chapters written in Italics, which are the original stories by her mother, and Ms. Ostroff did a good job writing accompanying chapters further explaining the historical events that her mother mentioned or lived through, giving the reader a clear picture of her mother’s story.

Sherry V. Ostroff chose to call the book, “The Lucky One” and refers to her mother as being “lucky” several times throughout the story. However, she also mentions that her mother did not consider herself “lucky”.

After reading the account of Ita’s life, I would not call her “lucky” either. I would call her “blessed”. Surely the way Ita (Sherry’s mother) and her mother (Sherry’s grandmother) were able to stay one step ahead of death could only have been orchestrated by God.

This story was a quick, easy read. It held my attention, and in some ways reminded me of Corrie Ten Boom’s “The Hiding Place”, though this story is not as detailed. If you like true, historical stories and stories about real people, I recommend that you read “The Lucky One” by Sherry V. Ostroff.

Big News!

I’m sorry if you came looking for a Flash Fiction Friday post here today, but I just couldn’t wait to share my “Big News”. Flash Fiction Friday will return again next Friday.

The photo below is the cover reveal of a book that holds thirty-three personal stories of God’s provision for the writers’ lives, and I am one of the thirty-three writers who has a story inside!

The following was taken from CrossRiver’s website, explaining a bit more about them and this book:

God’sPromisesHoldTrue

For us here at CrossRiver and for many of our authors, it has been a challenging year. Our mission is To glorify God by providing high-quality books and materials that ignite an individual’s relationship with God and inspires them to lead lives that honor Him.

Satan doesn’t want God to be glorified, so the enemy strikes where he can. Psalm 34:19 NLT tells us:

The righteous person faces many troubles,
but the Lord comes to the rescue each time.

God’s promises hold true. He is faithful. We can trust him.

However, we all need encouragement now and then. To that end, in November CrossRiver is releasing our newest anthology, Abba’s Promise: 33 Stories of God’s Pledge to Provide.

Why 33 stories? Because in biblical numerology 33 means promise, and that’s what this book is all about.

From our smallest to biggest need, God has promised to provide. And Hebrews 10:23 NLT tells us, “God can be trusted to keep His promise.” His promises anchor our hope. Additionally, our personal testimony is a powerful weapon against Satan. “They overcame him… by the word of their testimony” (Revelation 12:11 KJV).

From the provision of finances to His guiding presence to angelic protection, Abba’s Promise offers you 33 stories filled with hope and encouragement for today.

Debra Butterfield is an editor for CrossRiver and it was a pleasure working with her to get my story into this lovely anthology. You can read more about her at the CrossRiver website.

You can preorder this book of encouraging stories for just $9.99 (plus shipping and handling) at:

http://www.crossrivermedia.com/portfolio/abbas-promise/gallery/bookstore/

Anyone who knows me and would like me to sign your copy, I would be happy to do so.

Guest Post: The Drama of Writing YA

I’m taking a break from poetry today to bring you a special guest post by my good friend, Laura L. Zimmerman.

The Drama of Writing YA

Long after I left my “young adult” years, I continued to read the books out of sheer enjoyment for the genre. I’d slip through the doors of Barnes and Noble, duck my head, and sneak to the back of the store where all the newly released YA novels were displayed. I knew I wasn’t the only adult who enjoyed the genre, but somehow, standing between groups of thirteen-year-old girls felt a bit intimidating. Still that didn’t stop me from enjoying a good read.

Since then, there have been times when I’ve read a popular YA novel only to think, ‘Wait. That’s not realistic!’ or ‘Whoa. Serious mood swings!’ So it’s no surprise that as I began to seriously write YA, I’d aim to get ‘inside’ a teenagers head but would strive to think of a more mature response. Something I would like to read.

Except, I was completely wrong.

I know this first hand because an actual teenager who read my actual work called me out on it. Big ouch.

Months prior I’d given this fourteen-year-old family friend one of my YA manuscripts. She enjoys writing, too, so I felt confident she’d give me a balanced review of my work.

But when I asked for her response, it wasn’t what I expected. 

It was good, she said.

Oh.

Okay, she hadn’t said it was boring, or confusing, or a plethora of other nightmarish things that a writer never wants to hear. But ‘It was good’ wasn’t hitting it out of the ballpark, either. I asked if she could sum up what stopped it from being great.

Her response? Not enough drama.

My YA novel didn’t have enough drama in it. Oops.

Of course, I had to defend myself. (Right?) I explained that I was tired of reading YA novels with love triangles, or where the main character is wish-washy with all of his/her decisions. I wanted to speak to a more mature audienceone who didn’t want to play high school games.

Yeah, but a teenager doesn’t want to read that,” she said. “High school has drama in it. We’re teenagers. It’s what we do. A teen wants to read what they see every day. Not how they should act.” 

Oh. Right. Because they’re…teenagers.

And then it hit me: There is a basic formula for what makes a YA novel because it works. It has worked in the past. It works now. It will likely continue to work for as long as teenagers read YA. 

So, I went back and added a bit more theatrics to the story. A love triangle, a couple of lies, a few misconceptions between characters. Did any of it have anything to do with the storyline? Not really. 

But a little bit of drama goes a long way. 

A few years have passed since then, but each time I read a YA novel with a dramatic twist, I smile. That’s just how a teenager would act, after all. And that’s a good thing. For YA novels, anyway.

You can find out more about Laura at her website: www.lauralzimmerman.com, on Twitter @lauralzimm and Facebook.

Bio:

Laura L. Zimmerman resides in Phoenix, AZ and is a homeschooling mom to three beautiful daughters. She is thankful for a supportive husband, who is always quick to encourage her love of singing, reading, and drinking coffee. Laura enjoys writing young adult and middle grade fantasy fiction and hopes to encourage children toward a relationship in Christ through her work. Laura is represented by Cyle Young through Hartline Literary Agency.

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Mr. Penumbra’s 24 Hour Bookstore by Robin Sloan

Mr. Penumbra's 24-Hour Bookstore: A Novel by [Sloan, Robin]

Description

The Great Recession has shuffled Clay Jannon out of his life as a San Francisco Web-design drone—and serendipity, sheer curiosity, and the ability to climb a ladder like a monkey has landed him a new gig working the night shift at Mr. Penumbra’s 24-Hour Bookstore. But after just a few days on the job, Clay begins to realize that this store is even more curious than the name suggests. There are only a few customers, but they come in repeatedly and never seem to actually buy anything, instead “checking out” impossibly obscure volumes from strange corners of the store, all according to some elaborate, long-standing arrangement with the gnomic Mr. Penumbra. The store must be a front for something larger, Clay concludes, and soon he’s embarked on a complex analysis of the customers’ behavior and roped his friends into helping to figure out just what’s going on. But once they bring their findings to Mr. Penumbra, it turns out the secrets extend far outside the walls of the bookstore.

My Thoughts

This is Robin Sloan’s first full length novel, and if you are a book lover, or you love to hang out in bookstores and/or libraries, this book is for you. Also, if you are a techie and/or Google lover, you will love this book.

The story is full of mystery and intrigue and fascinating characters. I found myself having a hard time putting the book down. This is a very unique story and it connects libraries and bookstores with current technology, as well as revealing some interesting historical facts about publishing.

Mr. Sloan wrote great descriptions that brought the places and the characters to life. I never felt the story dragging nor did I ever feel lost.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story because I liked the characters and wanted to see them solve the mystery. I also love history and enjoyed learning the history of a typing font. The story was filled with fascinating things both history as well as some futuristic ideas. I look forward to reading more from Robin Sloan.

Flash Fiction Friday: Beatings and Kisses

He never saw the punch coming. The punch was followed by another and another. Then he was knocked to the ground and kicked in the side before the screaming crowd turned and walked away, disgusted, disappointed.

“Why didn’t he fight back?” He heard a voice ask.

“Because he’s a coward.” Another answered.

Converse black canvas high top Chucks appeared at his side. He tried to look up into the face that went with the shoes but the sun glared in his eyes.

He sat up. She squatted down next to him in a pale pink skirt with white lace and a hot pink tank top. He could see her clearly now. She had black curls surrounding a heart shaped face. He saw sadness in her sky blue eyes and her bright pink lips were pinched in a bow.

“Are you all right?” She asked.

“Yeah. This happens all the time.”

“Why?”

“Because I’m smaller than him. Because I get better grades them him.”

“You just let him hurt you. Why didn’t you try to run?”

“The crowd would’ve never let me out of the circle. They like a good fight, even if only one person is doing the fighting. They want to see the blood.” He wiped blood from his lip and then from his nose.

She handed him a tissue from a small packet she had in her small pink purse that hung from a silver chain from one shoulder, over her head and down to the other side of her waist. She brushed a stray strand of hair back from his forehead as he held the tissue to his nose.

“I’m an outcast too. My clothes are weird and I chew bubblegum.” She stood up and reached a hand down to him.

He took her hand and stood up. “You’re pretty.”

She smiled. “My name’s Mandy.”

“I’m Julius, another strike against me.”

“I like it.”

She leaned over and kissed his cheek. “I’ll see you tomorrow.”