Book Review: Unholy by Kathryn Amurra

Unholy is the third and final book in the “Heart’s True Desire” series by Kathryn Amurra. The books in this series are all very unique, and the one thing that ties them together is a very unusual necklace.

Unholy is a Vampire Romance. However, the vampire is the most unique vampire character I have ever encountered, and the story is the most unique Vampire Romance story I have ever read. The main character is Beth D’Angelo, who is a college student. She is striving to get her thermodynamics experiment to work so that she can graduate. She is working with another college student, and she has a boyfriend. Beth has strong beliefs she lives by.

Between Beth’s frustrations with her experiment and the issues between her and her boyfriend, Beth is quite stressed. Then, one evening as she’s driving, she is certain that she has hit someone with her car, adding to her stress levels.

When she meets, Thomas, a very attractive man, who takes an interest in her, she finds herself drawn to him. Thomas, who is actually a centuries old vampire, finds Beth’s sweet nature a challenge to corrupt her. However, it isn’t long before Thomas finds that Beth has something that he craves more than blood.

What happens between Beth and Thomas, and Beth and her boyfriend, makes for a very interesting twist in Unholy. It’s been years since I have even considered reading a vampire story, but I found that once I started reading Unholy, I couldn’t put it down. The uniqueness of several characters and the story line held my attention.

Ms. Amurra created deep, interesting characters that she developed so well from the beginning of the book and throughout the story. Even the vampire was realistic. Ms. Amurra produced such a unique story line that I was intrigued and captivated until the very end.

I will say that there is some profanity in this book, but it is spread throughout and not overwhelming. There are two scenes that may be problematic for sensitive readers. However, there are no scenes that include a lot of graphic violence, blood, and gore.

I highly recommend this book to adult readers who crave unique stories, as well as those who enjoy vampire stories. I will also say that, after reading Unholy by Kathryn Amurra, I believe Thomas will forever be my favorite vampire.

Although I have read most of Kathryn Amurra’s books, after reading Unholy, I have truly become a dedicated fan and cannot wait to see what she comes up with next.

Unholy is truly worthy of 5 stars.

Book Review: You Can Hide by Melissa Roos

You Can Hide is Melissa Roos debut novel. She has written several novels since this one, and though they are all stand alone stories, I like to at least read an author’s first book before reading later ones. Ms. Roos books are Mystery/Romance stories.

Back Cover Blurb:

Jayde Walker is left for dead. Somehow she survives, and is the only witness to the murder of her best friend, Carrie. Fighting amnesia, she tries to get on with her life with the killer still on the loose. Then one night she remembers. The truth terrifies her and breaks her heart. She has to run. She has to hide. Leave behind everything. And everyone.

She runs with no clear direction in mind. Halfway across the country, lost in the Midwest, she makes a wrong turn, down a dead end road. She ends up in a ditch, unable to remember how or why she got there. The only thing she knows is she needs to disappear. The tall, lush green cornstalks of the vast fields call to her. Without hesitation Jayde steps in and disappears.

She’s lost, but found. Who can save her? Her fiance she left behind? The detective she trusted, or the farmer that found her? Who can she trust with her life? And her heart?

NOTE: I have made some punctuation corrections in the Back Cover Blurb. However, I have left the writing as written, even though as an editor, I see things I would suggest be corrected.

My Thoughts on the Book:

I like the characters in You Can Hide. Miss Roos did a great job creating and developing her characters. The plot is filled with tension and suspense. It’s one of those stories that made me want to keep turning the pages, but not because I wanted to find out who the murderer was. I was more interesed in finding out how the romance in the story was going to turn out because I really liked the relationship between Jayde and the farmer who found her, and I was fairly certain I knew who the murderer was.

For me, I felt like the murderer was revealed near the beginning of the story. There was one point in the story that I thought it might be someone else, but as I looked back to the beginning of the book, there wasn’t any other character identified that it could have been. However, the way that the murderer sought after Jayde and all the tension that caused and built to the climax definitely kept me on the edge of my seat.

Unfortunately, I don’t think I’ll be reading any more books written by Melissa Roos because I wasn’t expecting a lot of profanity in this book, and when it first started appearing, it was mild and the words were few and far between. However, when I reached page 175 and found the Lord’s name taken in vain, I was shocked and taken aback. Then on page 176 the “f” word was used. There were only a few mild words up until that point, and even after those two pages, there weren’t too many profane words. However, in the last fourth of the books, the profanity became something that regularly came out of the characters’ mouths.

To me, that’s very sad. I don’t think those words are necessary to make a book realistic nor do I think they add anything to the story.

The other thing I found that distracted me from the story were the things that should have been taken care of in the editing process prior to publishing the book. I know that most professional editors charge a lot of money that most authors cannot afford, but there are some that will edit for a reasonable price. Even participating in a good critique group can help help with a lot of the errors I saw throughout this book.

I can only give this book 3 stars, and I’m not going to post it anywhere but here, (which will also post on my Facebook page), because I know book reviews are important to an author, but they don’t help it they can’t give lots of praise and at least 4 stars.

Book Review: The Beauty of Crows by Claire Sanders

I just have to say, “I LOVE this cover!

I have been a Claire Sanders fan ever since I read her “The Masons of Brightfield” sweet romance series in 2021. So, I was thrilled to find out that she released a new book, The Beauty of Crows. I was thrilled to receive a copy and asked to write a review, so this is my honest review.

I was intrigued by the title, The Beauty of Crows, because I’ve never thought of crows as beautiful birds. The title was the thing that attracted my attention and made me want to read this book.

I have to say I was very surprised. The Beauty of Crows includes quite a bit more tension than The Masons of Brightfield series. This tension kept me turning pages until past my bedtime every night.

In The Beauty of Crows, Ms. Sanders has created extremely interesting characters who have struggles that many readers have either experienced for themselves, or know someone close to them who has. Her character, Rachel, was raised by a strict father who is the pastor of a church like many churches years ago—churches where pastors preached “hellfire and brimstone”. Her father has kept Rachel on the straight and narrow and she thought her life was fine and she was content.

Alden Fairchild is a rebellious young man, who has grown tired of his father’s attempts to keep him on the straight and narrow because his father criticized him and always found him lacking. So, Alden quickly resorts to a life of seeking after his fleshly desires and pleasures, and there’s nothing he likes better than causing raised eyebrows among people who walk the straight and narrow. Alden’s actions eventually cause him to be blamed for a crime and he has to face the possibility of losing his life.

Rachel’s convictions lead her to committing perjury in an attempt to save the life of someone she really doesn’t like.

Alden’s actions and Rachel’s convictions cause them to cross paths and change both their lives forever.

The Beauty of Crows is a wonderful story with at least two great messages. It is a clean fiction novel with engaging characters and a tense, page-turning plot.

If you like your romance stories on the tense side causing you to wonder about the outcome until near the end of the book, I highly recommend The Beauty of Crows. If you’ve never read a Claire Sanders novel, I highly recommend you start with this one. You won’t be disappointed.

I give The Beauty of Crows 5 stars.

The Dorothea & Browen Trilogy Book Reviews

I love stories with dragons, so when I was at a Bookfest last October, I couldn’t pass by this trilogy. It’s taken me a while to get to it, but it certainly didn’t take me long to read these books. I think I had them all read in ten to twelve days. Now I want to share with you what I liked, and what I didn’t. This Dorothea and Browen Trilogy was written by J. K. Weyant.

Dragon’s Pick — Book One

This story grabbed my attention from the start as Dorothea’s family prepared to go to town to see the Dragon eggs. The village of Villa Ovo would care for the eggs until they hatched and the dragon would choose its rider. This story is about dragons and their riders and their training. The story is exciting and fast paced.

There were only two things I didn’t like about this book: 1) there was some profanity in it. I felt it was unnecessary, and it didn’t do anything to add to the story. Some of it wasn’t even used in proper context. Fortunately, the profanity was kept to a minimum. 2) As an editor, I’m very aware of grammar and spelling, and unfortunately there were a lot of grammatical errors in this book, and there were also words that should have been in sentences that weren’t. Fortunately, I was invested enough in the characters and the story line that the errors didn’t distract me as much as they ordinarily would.

Dorothea is the first female dragon rider in a long time because most of the dragons hatched were female, and female dragons chose male riders. Only male dragons chose female riders, and it had been many years since a male dragon had hatched. But Dorothea, age almost eighteen, left her village with three boys, all in their teens, and their dragons.

The things that happen to these four characters during their training held my interest throughout the book. The competition between the riders and their relationships created tension and action that kept me turning pages at a fast pace.

Dragon’s Loss — Book Two

In this book, it’s time for the riders’ graduation ceremony, but there have been some things going on that have Thea and one of the boys suspicious of the head of Castle Draco. The graduation ceremony turns into a disaster.

This book is full of adventure, danger, and tension. War may be coming and Thea must win over the dragon-hating Mutes of Kings Guard and convince The Golden Edge to form an alliance with the Dragon Riders and Mutes, the rebel army who helped Thea and her group of riders escape from Castle Draco.

Unfortunately, this book had the same editorial issues as the first book, though it has less profanity. The thing I liked least in this book is the fact that it includes sex outside of marriage. The scene is not overly explicit, but it is definitely clear that the characters engage in sex.

This book is full of tension and action, danger and fighting. There was enough suspense to keep me turning pages, and this book ends with a cliff hanger that made me glad I already had the next book, even though I didn’t pick it up until the next day.

Dragon’s Fall — Book Three

This book, again, held my attention and kept me turning pages. Just like the first two books in the series, it included lots of action, tension, danger, and fighting. In the beginning, there is an unexpected reunion.

Things I disliked about this book: 1) just like the first two books, this one had the same editorial issues; 2) even after being betrothed, a couple still participates in sexual activity before their wedding; 3) I felt like Thea was very self-centered in the first part of this book; 4) though this book is deemed a “trilogy” and this is book three, something is hinted at very near the end that is not fully disclosed or revealed by the end of the book that leaves the reader dissatisfied. I wonder why the author chose to do this in a book meant to be the end of a series. This was a disappointment to this reader. It’s been three years since this trilogy has been published. Therefore, I have to reiterate, why would the author hint at something she doesn’t intend to fully expose or resolve?

All in all, this book had me engaged from start to finish, just like the first two books. I also was happy with the growth and change in the characters. I would recommend these books to people eighteen and older who like stories with dragons and lots of action and suspense.

I would not recommend these books to those younger than eighteen because there is a lot of adult content. Things dealt with in these books are: violence and killing, torture, the effects of torture — both physical and psychological, though the psychological healing really isn’t exhibited, and as already mentioned, sex outside of marriage, and pregnancy outside of marriage.

Book Review: The Lonely Mortician by D. M. Tregaskis

I never have time to read an entire book in one sitting, and usually that doesn’t bother me. However, when I started reading The Lonely Mortician by D. M. Tregaskis, I did not want to put it down, and every time I had to, I couldn’t wait until I could pick it up again. I love Closed Door Romance stories in any genre and I read a LOT of them, but I can honestly say that I have never read one like The Lonely Mortician before.

D. M. Tregaskis wrote a story with a very complex story line and a lot of complications for the main female character, but I never once felt like it was bogged down or confusing. From Cinn’s job as a mortician, to someone haunting the house, to the dating game to raise funds for a community library, I was fully engaged in the story.

I found Cinn to be completely relatable and fully understood her confusion in regard to the men she dated for the dating game show. I felt her pain in the loss of people she loved, and not just in death. I also enjoyed watching Cinn’s change from the beginning of the story to the end. It was very realistic.

When two men, from the dating show, expressed serious interest in Cinn, I thought I knew which one I wanted her to choose. However, as the story progressed, that choice appeared much harder and not as crystal clear. D. M. Tregaskis also included some unique elements as well as some unexpected twists, which added depth and more than one positive message to the book.

This was the first book by D. M. Tregaskis I have read, but it will not be the last! I highly recommend The Lonely Mortician by D. M. Tregaskis to anyone from young adults to adults of all ages who enjoy fun, unique romance stories, and I can’t wait to get my next D. M. Tregaskis book.

For Adora — Part 8

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Melisande took a seat at the table in the kitchen and Griffin sat across from her. She studied the plate before her. “This looks good. Where’d you learn to cook?”

“My mom taught me some stuff. She also taught me how to follow a recipe, so I’ve been able to expand my culinary skills.” He grinned at her as he picked up his fork.

“We need to pray first.”

Griffin put his fork down as his face reddened. “Oh right.” He bowed his head and folded his hands in front of him.

Melisande reached across the table and took his hands in hers, then bowed her head. “Dear Heavenly Father, thank you for this food we are about to receive. Thank you for Griffin and his ability to cook a good meal. Please guide and direct Griffin and I in our thoughts, words, actions, and decisions, and please bless Adora. In Jesus’ name. Amen.”

She opened her eyes, picked up her fork, and her eyes collided with Griffin’s. She wasn’t sure what she saw there.

“That was nice.” Griffin picked up his fork and stabbed a piece of chicken.

Melisande followed suit, and for several minutes they ate without speaking.

Griffin was the first to break the silence. “Would you like to go into town tomorrow? Pick up some stuff that would be helpful to have for Adora. To make you more comfortable?”

That wasn’t what she’d expected him to say. “What do you have in mind?”

“A playpen, highchair, and some more toys. You might be more comfortable with her in a playpen instead of on the floor with Finnegan around.”

“Cats jump.” Realizing she sounded harsh, she attempted to temper her next sentence. “I’m sure Finnegan could easily jump into the playpen with her, if he wanted to.”

Griffin met her gaze once again. “He could, but I doubt that he would. I don’t think he’d be interested in being in such enclosed surroundings when he’s used to having the run of the house.”

He’s trying, Melisande. Give him a chance. She finished chewing a bite of vegetables and swallowed. “That would be nice.” She gave him a small smile and watched his eyes light up.

“Great! After lunch, I’ll work until two o’clock, then call it a day. That way we can go buy what we need, maybe grab dinner in town, and still return before it’s too late so that we don’t tire Adora out.”

“I’ll look forward to it.” She watched the corners of his lips tip up as he nodded. She also noticed his shoulders lower a bit. He’d probably been tense–worried how she would respond. This wasn’t the conversation they needed to have, but maybe it was better to start out this way–being kind and both of them trying to, maybe, begin as friends instead of trying to begin where they had left off a year ago. Too much time had passed, too many feelings had been hurt, and each of them had experienced too many changes to be able to do that.

For Adora — Part 4

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Melisande stopped next to her Mustang, stiffened, but didn’t turn around. The warmth of Griffin reached her as he stood behind her.

“Melisande, please, don’t go.”

She drew in a long breath and let it out in a slow exhale before turning around. Her eyes locked with Griffin’s. “Why should I stay?”

He scuffed a boot in the dirt. “Because I’m sorry … sorry for leaving the way I did, sorry for cutting off all contact.” His eyes moved to Adora, who was looking at him. He stepped toward Melisande, his focus on Adora. “Sorry I didn’t know about our little girl, Adora. Where did you get the name?”

“In Greek it means ‘gift’. In Old German it means ‘beloved’, and in Latin it means ‘adored’. And even though you deserted me, I wasn’t going to turn my back on the precious gift you gave me, even if it did take me awhile to accept that my pregnancy was a gift instead of a mistake. You see, even though what we did was wrong, God doesn’t make mistakes, and He had a purpose in giving Adora to me.”

His eyes still on Adora, his voice cracked as he asked, “May I hold her?”

A moment passed. Then Melisande said, “Talk to her. Then reach for her and see if she responds well.”

Griffin slid his palms down his thighs, then he leaned closer to Adora. “Hi Adora. It’s so very nice to meet you.”

Adora smiled and cooed.

Griffin held his hands out in front of her. “Would you like to come to me?”

Adora bounced on Melisande’s hip, waved her arms up and down, and squealed. Then she reached out to Griffin.

Griffin took her and placed her on his hip, his gaze never leaving her face. When she babbled something, then smiled up at him, his lips spread into a wide grin. He faced Melisande and said, “I think she likes me.”

“Yeah, well, at her age, she’s a pushover.”

His grin slipped. “Will you come back inside and … stay? Give me another chance?”

A knot formed in Melisande’s stomach, even as her heart skipped a beat. Was she wrong in coming here? She studied Griffin and Adora. Their hair color and skin tone were an exact match. Even Adora’s smile matched Griffin’s. She had a right to know her father.

She met Griffin’s gaze. “Yeah. We’ll stay for a little while. See how things go.” She strode past him and led the way up the porch steps to the front door. She opened it and let Griffin carry Adora in as she followed.

It would be so easy to let Griffin into her heart again, but she’d have to fight that. He’d have to prove himself to her, for her sake, but especially for Adora.

NOTE: I’m thinking of ending the story here. Let me know, in the comments, if you’d be satisified with this ending.

For Adora — Part 3

Griffin paced the living room. What was taking Melisande so long? Had she fallen asleep on the bed? He ran a hand through his hair. He’d dreamed of entering that room with her, watching her for the expressions on her face and in her eyes.

It had only taken him a couple months of being alone in Wyoming to realize he’d been foolish to leave Melisande behind. Then he’d bought the furniture and set up the purple bedroom just as she’d described it to him that night at Lookout Point — the night he’d kissed her for the first time. Her violet eyes had always drawn him in. He’d never seen eyes that color before and they were beautiful. Melisande’s every emotion shone through them with sparkles, flashes, and storms. He could drown in the depths of those violet pools. The day he’d told her they were over and he’d left, he’d seen the light in her eyes falter. Then they grew dark. He’d seen hurt in there. It had hit him like a fist to the gut, and still, he’d walked away.

The sound of movement at the top of the stairs interrupted his thoughts. He held his breath as he waited, his eyes on the stairway. When Melisande came into view, Adora on her hip, his breath caught in his throat. She must’ve brushed her hair, for now it hung in smooth waves around her face. Even with the dark circles of sleeplessness under her eyes, she was still beautiful. She stopped just a couple feet from the stairs and their gazes locked. Griffin couldn’t breath.

After a moment, his breath returned in a forceful exhale. “What are you doing here, Melisande? Did you come just to let me know about … the baby?”

Fire flashed through her violet eyes. “Her name’s Adora. And she’s only part of the reason for my coming. You left without any explanation and that has been eating me up inside. I can’t figure out what I did wrong.”

Tears pricked the backs of his eyes. “What you did wrong? You did nothing wrong.”

“Then why? I thought you loved me. You told me you did, and I … I gave you something that should’ve waited for my marriage bed.” She squeezed Adora closer to her side.

“I … I’m sorry. I was foolish and stupid, and as much as I wanted you, I … I didn’t want to be tied down.”

The corners of her mouth dipped into a frown and her eyes grew dark again. “Why did you come to Wyoming? What are you doing here?”

“I’m making rustic wood furniture and live-edge tables. I love it here in the mountains. In an area that hasn’t been developed into towns and neighborhoods. I breathe clean air.” His words came quick and he smiled.

She took a step closer to him. “You like being alone.”

His smile slipped. A moment passed. Then, “I did. At first. But I couldn’t get you out of my head.”

“Yet you never called. Not even a text. You haven’t even been back to see your parents.”

“It’s only been a few months.”

“A year, Griffin! It’s been a year. Right after you left, I found out I was three months pregnant. Six months later, Adora was born, and she recently turned six months old. Do the math.” She glared at him with a challenge in her eyes.

Griffin’s gaze dropped to the floor. “A year. How has that much time passed?”

“I guess you really do like it here by yourself.” She strode across the living room toward the kitchen.

Griffin turned and followed. “Where are you going?”

She spun around to face him. “I don’t know. But obviously you’re quite happy here. Alone. You don’t even realize how much time passes. I imagine you don’t need a woman and a child to ruin what you’ve obtained and are so happy with.”

Before Griffin could form a word, Melisande carried Adora through the front door. When it slammed, reality hit him. She was leaving. He ran after her.

“Melisande, wait!”

For Adora — Part 2

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At the top of the stairs, Melisande paused to peek into an open door on the right. Her eyes scanned the rumpled bed, a pair of jeans, and a red flannel shirt tossed on the floor. Must be Griffin’s room.

She walked a few steps farther down the hallway and found a closed door on the left. She turned the knob and stepped into a room with a plush purple carpet and a queen size canopy bed with a bedspread and curtains, tied to each post, the same color as the carpet. Two large windows with sheer lavender curtains allowed the waning sunlight to shine through. She nearly tiptoed across the room to the bed afraid of tracking dirt on the carpet. She paused by the bedside and fingered the curtains attached to the nearest post.

Adora let out a wail, alerting Melisande to her reason for being in this room. She lay her baby on the bed and pulled a changing pad, container of wipes, and a diaper out of the bag. She changed her little girl, placed her back on her hip, then stepped over to a simple small vanity table and stool. She looked in the small mirror that sat on the table. “Ugh, there’ll be no impressing anyone looking like this — my hair needs brushed and there are dark circles under my eyes, and my lips are dry and cracked.”

Adora grunted and pulled a handful of Melisande’s hair. “Right. What am I thinking? He left me long ago without another phone call or text. No reason to think he’ll take me back now. Besides you’re hungry.” Melisande plopped down onto the vanity stool and opened the top buttons to the midway point on her blouse and positioned Adora to feed her. Adora latched on and sucked with fervor. “Ouch! Take it easy, Adora.” Melisande ran her fingers through her baby’s fine, soft strawberry blonde curls. Adora had Griffin’s hair color and skintone. She had his smile too. Yeah, every time her baby smiled at her, Griffin returned to her mind.

As Adora nursed, Melisande couldn’t keep from looking at that bed again. Why did Griffin have such a feminine room set up — a room in the color purple with a bed like she’d always wanted? Griffin had always been fascinated by her violet eyes. Said they were the thing that attracted him to her and that he loved best about her.

She closed her eyes and her mind went back to the night Griffin had taken her to Lookout Point back in Pennsylvania. They’d sat on a blanket on the bed of his pickup and watched the sun go down over the glorious mountain view. That night Griffin had kissed her for the first time. He’d asked her what her dream home looked like. She’d told him she didn’t have it all figured out yet, but she knew she wanted a front porch with a nice view, and she’d described her bedroom — this bedroom.

Two weeks later, Griffin had taken her to the beach. They’d walked on the beach hand-in-hand. That night, he’d talked her into getting a hotel room on the beach instead of driving back home. He told her he loved her, and she’d given him something she knew was meant for her future husband. After that night, she’d struggled with guilt over what they’d done, and Griffin had promised she had no reason to feel guilty. He’d promised he’d marry her, but when she wanted to know when, he said he had to figure some things out first. Three months of putting her off, and then he told her they were through and he left town without giving a reason.

Melisande looked down at her precious baby, the only thing about that night that she didn’t regret. Adora was sound asleep. Melisande brushed the backs of her fingers down the baby’s soft, warm cheek. “Oh Adora, did I make a mistake bringing you here? What on earth am I doing? We’ve traveled so far. What will we do if he throws us out? It’s a long trek back to Pennsylvania from Wyoming.”

For Adora — Part One

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As I drove down the dirt road, a wooden fence stretched for several miles on my right. On the other side of that fence, a green meadow provided food for a herd of sheep, before I passed a barn with a wheat field behind it. Next came a small cabin.

Straight ahead of me, a few miles in the distance, sat a small homestead with a large line of golden brown craggy rock mountains jutting from the land into the beautiful clear blue sky lined with white cotton clouds.

I took a deep breath as I stared in awe at the beauty before me. How could anyone take in such a spectacular scene and still question the existence of God, the mighty creator?

An infant’s hungry cry broke through the majesty of the moment. I reached a hand over to the carseat buckled in next to me. “Shh, Adora, I know you’re hungry and your diaper probably needs changed, but we’re almost there. The homestead is just ahead.”

Adora cried louder.

I sighed. “Yes, I know. I, too, wonder if we will be welcomed or turned away.” I put both hands on the wheel again, gripping it until my knuckles turned white. “What will we do? Where will we go if he turns us away?”

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The purr of an engine and the crunch of ground drew Griffin’s attention from the newspaper he was reading. He rose from his wooden chair at the oak table and Finnegan meowed from his mat by the fireplace. Griffin moved to the kitchen sink and looked out the window toward the road. He watched as a Classic 1968 red Ford Mustang drove toward his homestead, a cloud of dust in its wake.

“What the…” He leaned toward the window. “No, it can’t be.” He remained glued to the spot, his eyes locked on the car, as his heartbeat pounded a faster rhythm.

The Mustang pulled into the dirt lane and drew up to the front of the cabin, before it came to a stop. Griffin couldn’t move, as he waited to get a good look at the driver. Several minutes passed, his heart still thumped in his chest, causing him to wonder if he were having a heart attack, but there wasn’t any pain.

After several more minutes, the driver’s door opened and a brown leather boot beneath a bluejean-clad leg landed on his dirt lane. A petite woman, with chocolate brown waves of hair falling around her face, stood, placing a strawberry blonde infant on her hip.

Griffin’s breath caught in his throat and he coughed, trying to regain his breath. He watched as the woman stepped onto his front porch and approached his door. Still unable to move, even though the woman and baby were no longer in his line of sight.

Her knock seemed to loosen his feet and he moved toward the door with caution. He took a deep breath and blew it out in a great gust before opening it. When he did, his feet seemed to once again grow roots where he stood as he looked into the woman’s violet eyes. He cleared his throat, trying to dislodge the lump that seemed to prevent him from talking.

“Melisande, what are you doing here?”

“You’re a hard man to track down, Griffin, but I figured it was about time you meet your daughter.” She turned the baby on her hip, so he could get a better look at her face. Though her hair was strawberry blonde and her skin peaches and cream, she had her mother’s violet eyes. “This is Adora.”

The child stared at him for a moment, then began to cry.

“Look, can we come in? We’ve been on the road for days and stayed in a hotel or two, but we’ve been driving now for four hours straight and she’s hungry and needs a diaper change.”

Griffin’s head spun. Where? How … no, forget that one, he knew how. He couldn’t form words. He stepped aside and Melisande stepped through the entrance. He watched her eyes scan the kitchen and the open doorway to the living room. Then she looked at him. “You got an extra bedroom where I can feed and change her?”

He pointed her to the stairway along the right wall of the living room. “Up those stairs, first door on your left.”

Finnegan stood, arched his back, and meowed as he eyed the stranger, as Melisande walked past him without a glance.

Griffin watched as Melisande climbed the steps without hesitation, like she belonged here. A knot formed in his stomach. He’d left Melisande behind months ago, told her they were over. Now she was in his home and she had his daughter. His daughter. What on earth was he going to do now?

(Note: I had planned this to be a Flash Fiction story, but the characters in my head often take over and determine where the story goes. I wasn’t planning on a baby being part of this story, but as I was writing in a local coffee shop, she was suddenly there. And the last words I wrote in the coffee shop were “What will we do? Where will we go if he turns us away?” and when I sat down to finish the story here, I soon found that this is going to be longer than a Flash Fiction story. I hope you’ll enjoy it and go along for the ride. I’ll add to it every Friday until it comes to an end.)