Winter Writers’ Retreat

Several months ago, I received an email from my writing friend, Lisa at Lisa’s Musings, talking about the possibility of having a Winter Writers’ Retreat.  She asked me for ideas and she shared her ideas with me.  Then we talked about what the schedule might look like and how we could keep it very low cost by simply having a simple lunch of sandwiches and salads and a dessert, with drinks and snacks available throughout the day, and the lunch would be all that each person would have to pay for.  Lisa also ran the idea by our friend, Donna at Donna L. H. Smith, who helped with some activity planning, getting the word out and registration.

So, this past Saturday, February 27th, seven (counting Lisa) of us got together at Lisa’s house for this retreat.  Donna asked us to introduce ourselves and share what type of writing we do and how long we’ve been married and how many children we have.  Then she opened with a devotion and prayer.

Lisa had asked me, during the planning, if I would be willing to lead an activity.  She gave me two choices and I chose the one I felt was the less daunting of the two.  🙂

Therefore, after the opening devotion and prayer, I led a creative writing exercise.  I was relieved when everyone found the exercise to be so much fun.

After the creative exercise, Lisa gave us two characterization exercises and two setting exercises and we spread out around the downstairs of Lisa’s beautiful home to spend some time writing, using at least one of these exercises.  I actually used a combination of one of the characterization and one of the setting exercises and I applied them to my current work in progress.  I think the creative writing exercise we started with helped to get my brain into writing mode.  (Of course that was the purpose.)

The next thing we did was break into two groups and we each shared about something we are currently struggling with in our work in progress, whether it was a plot problem, problem with a character or with the setting, or something else.  Then the others in the group helped to brainstorm to come up with ideas to work the problem out.

During lunch we had conversation about upcoming writers’ conferences, what we thought of the retreat up to that point, self-publishing and the possible challenges that would include, flash fiction and blog writing.

After lunch we had a critique group, where Lisa shared the critiquing process — a way to help and encourage the writer, not rip their work to shreds — to begin with a positive, then point out something that could use some work or fixing up with an idea or suggestion for that, and concluding with another positive.  These things need to be specific to be of any real help to the writer and the people doing the critiquing need to consider the Big Picture.

We ended with another prayer and an excerpt from a book that Lisa recommended for encouragement.

I cannot speak for any of the other ladies, but I found this day so very helpful.  I was able to leave there with a fresh excitement about writing, especially working on my work in progress.  I had been struggling with something before that and so the brainstorming for story problems was a huge help with that.  I also really enjoy being able to share with other writers because they understand me and I understand them.  We can help and encourage one another and that is so valuable.

Everyone left with a desire to do another retreat in the future.

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This was the great group of ladies who attended, minus Donna, who took the photo.

I encourage all of you who write to find a group of writers you can spend time with talking, sharing, brainstorming, problem solving, and encouraging one another.  You may even want to consider starting your own small writers’ group or hold your own small simple retreat like the one we just had.  Writing is a solitary activity and can be stressful.  It’s good to step out of your writing closet and breathe some fresh air and spend time with others who understand your struggles and the way your mind works (you know, that you talk to your characters and stuff).

Have you been to a writers’ retreat?  Do you belong to a writers’ group?

Flash Fiction Friday: Heartache

Cal walked into the bar.  He sat at a small table in a dark corner.

The piano man sat down.  He started playing just a few feet away from Cal.

The waitress came to take Cal’s order.  He ordered four shots of whiskey.  He hoped that would kill the pain, at least temporarily.  Then the piano man started playing that song; their song; her song.

“Play something else,” Cal demanded.

The piano man switched songs without pause.  Cal sat back.  He downed his shots.  He put his head in his hands.

The whiskey quickly went to his head.  He wasn’t a drinker.  He just couldn’t stand the pain but even the whiskey wasn’t deadening it.

He put money on the table, rose, stumbled.

“You okay, honey?” The waitress asked.

“I’ll never be okay again,” he said as he weaved toward the door.

 

My Crazy Life

I began a post for Wordless Wednesday yesterday but before I could get it up the major thunderstorm we were having knocked out our electricity which knocked out my wifi.  What a bummer!

Today I have no specific theme, so you get to read my ramblings.  Ha ha!  I’ll try to be brief and make sense.

For those who don’t know, I homeschool my children.  My oldest graduated our homeschool almost four years ago, took some time off and is now attending college.  This is his freshman year.  He is an hour-and-a-half away and doesn’t drive or have a car.  Tomorrow my other two sons and I will be picking him up.  He’ll be here for about a week!

My second son will graduate our homeschool this year and he wants to go to a two (possibly three) year Bible school that is ten hours away!

My youngest will begin middle school next year.

All of that to say that as homeschoolers we’ve been extremely busy.  We’ve been involved in co-ops, sports, music lessons, a writers’ club, and, this year, a Literature discussion group.

Almost two weeks ago, my van died, and so now we are down to one vehicle, and it looks as though we will be for at least a year.  Ordinarily I would have freaked out about this, but I have really been feeling a need to scale things back and not be so busy.  I’m looking forward to a much simpler life for a while.  Therefore, today was our last time at the Literature discussion group.  Monday will be our last day at our small co-op.  Tomorrow night is the final basketball game.

This will give me some more time to enjoy schooling our youngest son before he gets to the busy teen years.  Hopefully, it will also allow me more time to do a lot more writing, and hopefully finally get into a set schedule for my writing that I will be able to stick to.

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Now, for some writing talk.  This Saturday, I will be attending a small Winter Writers’ Retreat.  It will include Creative exercises, which I will be leading.  I am excited about it, but was at first found the idea quite daunting.  I found some great resources online that I think will be a lot of fun and help us with some of the more common items that writers sometimes struggle with.

There will also be a Brainstorming session, Critique time and free writing time.  I am hoping it will give me a boost as I have been struggling with my current story, which I was originally so excited about.

 

Top Ten Tuesday

I know I’m late posting, but it is still Tuesday.

I decided to join the Top Ten Tuesday determined by The Broke and The Bookish.  Therefore, today’s Top Ten Tuesday is focused on “Books I Recently Enjoyed that Weren’t my Typical Genres”.   NOTE: After completing this list, I realize that it is actually not exactly following The Broke and the Bookish’s topic, because I must’ve missed the word “enjoyed” when I read the topic. My list is definitely  Books I Recently Read that Weren’t my Typical Genres, but obviously, I didn’t “enjoy” them all.

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1.  Mystery Mountain (Book Four) by Marie Grace

This book has so many plot lines, I really can’t say what specific genre it is.  However, I read it and found it hard to follow because of the long list of characters that were difficult to keep straight as well as the multiple plot lines.  Also, by the end of the story, since another book is planned, the author didn’t really tie up any loose ends or resolve any of the plot lines.  For more information you can read my review.

2.  Inspirational Reflections by Ian J. Roberts

I don’t normally sit down and read through an entire book of poetry, but I did this one.  It was a fast, easy read.  I felt most of the poems were fairly good but did find that most focused on the same theme or topic.  I thought since it was “Inspirational” a little more variation that included more Biblical truths would have been more enjoyable.  You can read more of my thoughts on the book by reading my review

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3.  Lady of Devices by Shelley Adina

This is the first ever Steampunk book I have read and I loved it.  Shelley created wonderful characters with an interesting and exciting plotline.  She also offered a couple of wonderful scenes that were reminiscent of Charles Dickens’ Oliver Twist, one of my favorite classics.  This is the first book of Shelley’s series and I look forward to reading every single one of them.  Feel free to read my review.

4.  A Just Man by Helen Daniel

This is a sweet story that follows several generations of one family through the trials and successes of their lives.  However, I found it a bit calm for my liking.  I prefer a book with a bit more meat and a little less perfection.  This is not my usual genre choice either and you can learn more by reading my review.

5.  The Golden Braid by Melanie Dickerson

This book is and isn’t my typical genre.  It is because it includes romance and history.  It is not because it is a fairy tale retelling.  This was the first book I have ever read by Melanie Dickerson and I thoroughly enjoyed it.  I am sure I will read more books by Ms. Dickerson in the future.  Check out my review for more about this good read.

6.  Beneath the Pines by Sandra Gowan

To be quite honest, I don’t remember much about this story.  That could be because I felt the plot was rushed and the characters not fully developed.  You can read more about my disappointment about this story by reading my review.

7.  The Big House on Adams Street by Alberta Sparks

This was a wonderful heartwarming story outside of my typical genre.  I enjoyed this story and its characters very much.  Read more at my review.

8.  When Mockingbirds Sing by Billy Coffey

As a supernatural story, this book is out of my normal genre.  However, I found this story intriguing.  It held my attention and I couldn’t decide what I thought of the main character.  To find out more read my review.

9.  20 Short Ones (20 Short Stories) by Dan Salerno

I don’t typically read short stories, but I did enjoy most of the stories in this book.  All of the stories in the book are about relationships.  No, they are not all romantic.  Read my review for more details.

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10.  A Thousand Sleepless Nights by Michael King

To be quite honest, I read this book because it was written by a gentleman I have had the pleasure of meeting on several occasions.  He writes a completely different genre under a different name and I really enjoy those books.  But I have to say I was not disappointed with this story.  It was well written and very realistic and believable.  Read my review.

Metaphor Monday

I don’t have a book review to post today, so I thought I’d do something different.  Do you like metaphors?  Do you use metaphors in your writing?

Here are just a few metaphors that came across my mind today:

“He is a tall, thin reed of a man.”

“A book is a ship to sail a thousand seas.”

“Her tender kiss is sugary sweet.”

“His voice is music to my very soul.”

Feel free some of your own metaphors in the comments.

Flash Fiction Friday: Fairy Tale

Ametrine followed the sound of the voice.  Someone was singing in a voice so sweet, so musical it was almost mesmerizing.  She walked through the woods to a small clearing.

There Ametrine saw a beautiful girl with flowing waves of brown hair.  The girl had flawless sun gold skin.  She was dressed in a regal red gown.  She sat upon a rock by a small waterfall in a clear stream.  Birds flitted around her head.  Squirrels and rabbits sat by her feet.

Ametrine looked down at her own mottled skin.  She fingered the mole on her cheek, the bump on her nose.  A jealous rage filled her.  She ran back to her cottage.

A few minutes later Ametrine returned to find the girl still singing in the clearing.  Ametrine pulled the hood of her cloak over her head.  It helped to conceal her ugliness.  She approached the beautiful girl.

The girl looked up.  Her eyes met Ametrine’s.  She stopped singing.  She gasped.  She rose to her feet.

“Don’t be afraid,”  Ametrine cooed, looking into the girl’s emerald green eyes.  “I’ve come with a special treat for you.  I heard you singing like music to my ears.”

The young girl smiled.  Her cheeks turned pink.

“What is your name, child?”  Ametrine said.

“Isadora Calliwell.  I’m afraid I wandered too deep into the woods.  I’m not sure which way to go to get home.”

Ametrine had sucked in a breath at the girl’s name.  Surely she couldn’t be the Princess Calliwell of Lockridge Kingdom.  What on earth was she doing alone in the woods?  

A smile passed quickly over Ametrine’s lips.

“My dear, won’t you accept a bit of this chocolate cake?”

Isadora took the cake.  Chocolate was her favorite.  She began to eat.

When there was but a bit of cake left Isadora said, “I’m feeling quite sleepy.  I really should get back.”

Isadora started as Ametrine began to cackle and thrust off her cloak.  “You will not return, for now I shall steal your beauty.  I will return to Lockridge Kingdom to take your place.  You shall remain asleep in these woods forever.  The only way the spell can be broken is if a lonely old woodsman finds you and places a kiss upon your lips before ten years have passed.  There haven’t been any woodsmen around her for thirty years.”  She cackled once more.

Isadora fell asleep.  Ametrine placed the palm of her right hand against the palm of Isadora’s left hand.  She closed her eyes as the changes took place.  When she felt the change was complete, she opened her eyes.

Lying before her, Isadora now had the mottled skin, the mole on her cheek and the bump on her nose.

Ametrine stretched out her arm and saw the flawless sun gold skin.  She reached up and ran her hand through her new wavy, brown tresses.  She laughed.  It was not a cackle.  She sang a line and goosebumps appeared on her arms at the sound of her now musical voice.

She ran out of the woods toward Lockridge Kingdom.

Writer Interview

Today, I want to introduce you all to my writing friend, Julie Helms.  She was kind enough to answer some questions and allow me to post the interview here.

Me:  What piqued your initial interest in writing?  and How long have you been writing?

Julie:  I started writing only after I turned 40.  In high school, a teacher wrote on my progress report that got sent home:  “Julie can’t write, and she’ll never be able to.”  I can’t stress the amount of damage that comment did to me.  I actively resisted all writing after that through high school and college.

In college, I took a required English course taught by the VP of the university.  She called me into her office one day.  She wanted to know why on earth I was majoring in biology instead of something to do with writing.  She said I was a promising writer.  I just simply didn’t believe her…didn’t she get the memo?…the one that said I can’t write and will never be able to?

Two years later, a second professor called me out publicly during class in a lecture hall.  He had given the class a writing assignment that he felt was so difficult that he made it pass/fail only (it was to write a Greek comedy play).  So he was passing the assignments back and he announced my name and walked up to my desk (as a desperately shy person, I wanted to dig a hole, curl up, and die.)  He told the class my play was so well written there was no way he could just give me ‘pass.’  He gave me an A+.  Of all his classes, he said, I was the only one to get this.

You would think that after that I would embrace my inner muse and apply myself to the craft of this great calling.  But that careless comment from my high school teacher just screamed inside my head.  I sure showed my college prof…I threw my Greek play in the trash and I never attended another class in that course.

I wrote nothing for the next 20 years.

About ten years ago, I discovered Helium.com.  It was an online writing site that anyone could post to.  It didn’t matter if you could write or not, it was open to everyone.  Some little niggling in the back of my mind encouraged me to just give it a shot.  It sounded fun.  I posted under a pen name so I wouldn’t embarrass myself if my writing really sucked.  I was pleasantly surprised when I began to win some contests they held, and even more shocked when outside companies began purchasing my articles.  Helium went out of business about five years later.  In that time I had written 126 articles, stories, and poems.  About 20 of them were purchased for publication elsewhere.

Before they went under, Helium hired me as a freelance writer and editor for a different branch of their company that specifically offered professional writing services to other companies.  It wasn’t anything sexy, but it included writing for real estate companies, email coupon sites, and Sears and Kmart catalog descriptions.  It was during this time period that I discovered I had an aptitude for editing and really enjoyed it.  This branch of Helium (Content Source) was purchased by RR Donnelly, who I continue to work for to this day as a freelance editor.  My biggest customer is Amazon’s CreateSpace, their self-publishing arm.

To this point, I’ve sold only nonfiction, informational-type writing, which I don’t find particularly stimulating.  I want to write stories!

Me:  What types of things do you like to write?

Julie:  My focus now is on short stories and a novel-in-progress.

Me:  Do you study writing?

Julie:  I took my first writing course this fall from Gotham University online.  It was Fiction I.  I’m now taking a course from the same university called Novel II.

Me:  What do you consider important resources every writer should have?

Julie:  As basic as it sounds:  access to a dictionary and thesaurus!  I also love my most recent acquisition of The Emotion Thesaurus.

Me:  Do you like to read?

Julie:  Yes, I do now.  I was very late to discover the joy of reading.  Though I could read from the time I was supposed to in grade school, it was laborious and nothing close to fun.  I was in 9th grade when I read my first book for enjoyment.  It was like a light came on in my brain.  I then became a voracious reader.  Currently I read two to three novels per week.

Me:  Do you believe it is important to read in order to be a good writer?  Why or why not?

Julie:  Based on my history, I think the connection between reading and writing is obvious.  When my high school teacher said I couldn’t write, I probably really couldn’t…because for one thing I really hadn’t started reading yet, at least not easily.  In my fiction class this past fall, my teacher commented on my first submitted work that I had done three particular things very well.  I had to look up all three terms she used–I had no idea what they meant, so it’s pretty obvious I didn’t do any of it intentionally.  I told her this and she asked me if I liked 19th century writers.  I said I do.  She said I was modeling my writing techniques after them.  So I think the read/write connection is a strong one.

Me:  What is your favorite genre to read?  Why?

Julie:  Depends.  The vast majority of the reading I consume is commercial fiction.  I watch literally zero TV, so reading takes the place of that.  And most of the time I want to just read for entertainment.  It could be romance, crime drama, or psychological thrillers.

Occasionally, I will pull out something more along the lines of literary fiction.  That is when I’m in the mood to really enjoy the writing itself, the sound of the sentences–and I often do read it out loud.  This would be my 19th century writers…maybe Jane Austen, Edgar Allen Poe, or Nathanial Hawthorne.  I can read the first paragraph of Pride and Prejudice ten times and get the same thrill each time–the writing is to be slowly savored and appreciated.  As politically incorrect as it is to say this, I dislike much of what is touted as classics in 20th century literature.  I find them pretentious, self-absorbed, and frankly boring.  Just shoot me before making me read any more Faulkner, Hemingway, or JD Salinger.

Me:  Who is your favorite author?  Why?

Julie:  Commercial fiction:  Diana Gabaldon.  I love her Outlander series.  What a beautiful mix of romance and adventure with a little sci-fi thrown in.  I think she is a wonderful writer, though verbose at times.

Literary fiction:  Nathanial Hawthorne.  The man can set a scene like no one else.  You can feel the creepiness and ennui of The House of Seven Gables creep into your bones while you read.  you can feel the shame and hypocrisy close in on you in The Scarlet Letter and The Minister’s Black Veil.  Actually Poe does this very well, too.  The Fall of the House of Usher…best story ever!

Me: What was your favorite book as a child?  What did you like about it?

Julie:  Reading was such a chore for me, so ‘favorite’ would be overstating it, but I do remember liking The Borrowers when it was assigned in 6th grade.  I was fascinated by stories of fantasy lands.

Me:  When and where do you write?

Julie:  Usually in my recliner in the sitting area of my bedroom.  I am nothing if not a creature of comfort, plus it is the only place in my house that I can escape all other humans for a time.  I do everything on computer, no writing in notebooks.

Me:  Do you have an established writing routine?

Julie:  No, but I need to.  Unfortunately, life keeps getting in the way.  I write in fits and spurts, but I would like to be disciplined and intentional about it.

Me:  Do you like to listen to music when you write?  If so, what type of music?

Julie:  I absolutely cannot listen to music when I write.  I also can’t have much activity going on around me–no TV, conversation, etc.  Participating in our Scribes Oasis writing group is really the only time I write with people in my vicinity, since I am a big one for talking through problems out loud, and that’s embarrassing to do with witnesses!

Me:  Are you part of any writers’ groups?

Julie:  Scribes Oasis and an online writing class I take through Gotham University that functions as a writing group in some ways (eg. interaction with others, critiquing).

Me:  Do you think it’s important to be part of a writers’ group?  If so, why?

Julie:  I think it is very helpful.  I’ve used my group to brainstorm ideas when I was stuck and to get feedback on what I’ve written.  I think the feedback is especially important so you can see what’s working and what isn’t.

Me:  Have you ever written anything that was published?

Julie:  When I wrote for Helium.com I sold dozens of articles, mostly short nonfiction, for publication usually online.  Topics varied from info about insects or farm animals, to military history, to biblical concepts.  I have contributed to a coffee table book about cats, as a ghost writer.  And I’ve had a poem and autobiographical account stolen and printed online without permission–does that count as publication?  🙂

Me:  Do you have a blog that is related to your writing?  If so, what is your blog address?

Julie:  Not at this time.

Me:  Do you think it is important for a writer to establish an online presence?  Are you on any social media?

Julie:  It probably is, but this would be an area that I know little about and need to learn more.  I use some social media but not yet related to my writing.

Well, Julie, it’s been a pleasure chatting with you and learning about your writing journey.  I certainly wish you the best as you continue to write, and hope to read your novel after publication.

Top Ten Tuesday

Here is my first Top Ten Tuesday post, and I thought I’d share 10 of my favorite songs of all time from #10 down to the #1.  (Yes, these could change as more songs come up in future years, but these are my current all time faves.)

Mystery Mountain Four by Marie Grace

I received a free eBook copy of Mystery Mountain Four by Marie Grace to review for BookLook Blogger.

Book Description

Marie Grace wows readers with the fourth novel in her Mystery Mountain series. In the small town of Raincroft, the bonds of love and family are stronger than all outside or dangerous influences and adventures while romance blossoms between two unlikely people. Through determination and strength, Grace’s engaging characters find the courage to overcome adversity.

I have not read the first three books in this series and therefore, I was not familiar with the characters or the setting and the author did not offer any background that would help a reader who didn’t read the previous books.

I think Marie Grace has some great story ideas.  She has many plot ideas and character ideas.  The problem I found was that there were too many characters and too many plots in this one book.  I know this is a continuation of three previous books but I think it would’ve worked better if she had separated some of the characters and plot lines into the separate books in the series.  I believe that would make the story easier to follow.

In addition, it would have given the author more time and space to create a solid setting with understandable description.  She also would have been able to put more time and detail into creating her characters so that they would be deeper and more enjoyable.

As it is, I felt like the story jumped around too much.  Also, there didn’t seem to be enough time spent on creating the conflicts in the stories and the author often switched back and forth between present and past tense.  A couple of her characters spoke a dialect that the author attempted to write, which I found distracting and annoying.  I also found contradictions in some of her characters that seemed out of place.  There were also some places where she switched point of view in the same paragraph or scene, even though she had page breaks and chapters.  The page breaks and chapters seemed to transition to a different location or story line.

In this book, out of the many characters that were part of the story, I felt like I only really got to know two of them fairly well and I found their romance cute but juvenile.

I believe Marie Grace has great ideas for a great series here, but I would highly recommend that she go back and break it apart and put fewer characters and conflicts into each story; to focus on not more than four main characters and maybe four conflicts per book.  I believe if she did that and really developed those four main characters and the conflicts, her stories would be much more readable and enjoyable.  I also suggest that she find an interesting way to include the information as to why a select few of the characters seem to have speech issues without trying to write their issues in their dialogue.

There didn’t seem to be a single connecting theme throughout the book either.  It seemed that there were many themes that Marie Grace addressed and there were times when the message(s) she wanted to get across came across preachy.  Also, I didn’t feel like there was any real resolution to any of the plot lines in the story by the end of the book, which was also disappointing.  I understand she wanted to have some loose ends to tease her readers with in hopes they would want to read the next book in the series, but with all of the plot lines she had, I think it would have left me feeling better about the book if one or two of the plot conflicts had come to clear resolution by the end of the book.

In conclusion, I like Marie Grace’s story line ideas and the characters I was able to get a grip on.  However, I found the book difficult to read and follow.  I would recommend this book to the Young Adult audience but feel it’s too juvenile for the adult audience written as it is.  If Marie Grace was to go back and do a bit of editing and break the story and flesh out her characters and add more meat to the conflicts for each book of the series, I believe it would be a much better, stronger series that would definitely be interesting and enjoyable for adults.  I see a lot of potential in these stories.