Thaddeus Stevens: The Making of an Inconvenient Hero

I know I usually only post once a week and always on Thursdays, and I don’t usually post book reviews.  However, as a writer, reading is also a big part of my life, and as a part of a writers’ group, I connect with other writers, and we can all use a little help in promoting our work.  Therefore, when I had an opportunity to receive a free copy of a new book by one of the other writers’ in my writers’ group, I jumped at the chance.  It is an historical fiction story for children, what we homeschoolers refer to as a “living book”.  Here is my review of Thaddeus Stevens:  The Making of an Inconvenient Hero by Terry Webb.

Thaddeus Stevens: The Making of an Inconvenient Hero is a good account of the young life of Thaddeus Stevens. It is a story of great encouragement for those who are bullied and exhibits a very appropriate way of dealing with bullies. This story also expresses what life was like when the north and the south disagreed about slavery. It’s a wonderfully honest account, showing both the strengths and weaknesses of Thaddeus Stevens, as well as what his life was like on a farm in Vermont, living with a disability and being raised by a single parent.

There was one disappointing factor about this book and that is that I wish Ms. Webb would have written more about Thaddeus as he was older and championing the importance of everyone receiving an education. I felt that she ended her telling of his young life quite abruptly to include a chapter on his life as an older gentleman, expressing the work he had done to ensure that children, whether rich or poor, would receive an education.

However, this book is a wonderful teaching tool and allows great discussion with students about many issues that Thaddeus Stevens faced in his life; issues that students still face today.

You can purchase your own copy at Amazon.com in either paperback or Kindle edition.

Writing and Giving Thanks

I know, I’m a day late again.  I’m sorry, but our homeschool co-op had their Performance Night last night where the kids get to display work they’ve done in some of their classes, and they get to perform things like skits, Bible recitations, music and songs from other classes.  It was almost my bedtime when we got home, and instead of booting up the computer to post here, I sat down and read a couple of chapters in a book.  Why?  Because I have found if I read before bed, I sleep well.  However, if I do anything else before bed, especially anything on the computer or writing related, I cannot sleep because my brain won’t stop.  Does anyone else have this problem?

Now, let’s get to the real post:  Thanksgiving is less than a week away, and I have lots to be thankful for, and some of it is writing related.  For the past year, I have been immersing myself in books on writing and in participating in the Lancaster Christian Writers’ to hone my craft after having taken so many years off from writing.  I have written a little bit during the past year, but not like I want to.

That’s what I am thankful for — I am finally gearing up and writing seriously.  Over the past week or two I was feeling frustrated because I have a burning desire to write, but am still struggling with finding time to write.  I know what you’re thinking, if you really want to write, you’ll make time (I’ve heard this many times before), but homeschooling two children and being taxi for three children, doing the housework (which, thankfully, the kids help with), and cooking, especially as we are trying to eat much healthier and not eat processed, pre-packaged foods takes a lot of time.  However, because of the changes I have made in my eating habits, I have more energy than I’ve had in a long time, which has enabled me to see how things would work if I got up two hours before the kids each morning to write, and guess what, it’s been working.  Now, I will admit, I haven’t been successfully disciplined enough to do it everyday yet, but, hey, three or four times a week is a pretty good start, and sometimes, I actually do have a couple of hours in an afternoon to devote to writing.

Also, I have been working on a story, but I am approaching this story much differently than any story I have written before.  If you’ve been following my blog, you know that I have always been a “pantser”, meaning I simply sit down and write with no outline or map of any kind.  This time I’ve decided to try doing planning and outlining before actually writing the story, so I am still in the planning/outlining stage, which doesn’t feel like real writing to me yet because it hasn’t come naturally to me, though it is working well.  I see the value of it.  Therefore, I will continue working on the planning/outlining and then write the story once the map is laid out.

Because the planning/outlining doesn’t feel like real writing to me, I decided that I also need to just sit down and write whatever comes into my head, as this will help me to write everyday, and to be able to write something that feels like it flows because it’s going back to “pantsing”.  That is working wonderfully.

In addition to that, I have decided to do what Jeanette Windle of Lancaster Christian Writers’ keeps telling us — to write other things while we are working on stories/books; things that are shorter, that we can submit and earn some money from while working on the longer projects.  Therefore, I wrote a children’s devotion this week and submitted it to a children’s/family devotional magazine, and I am looking for other places where I can submit articles or short stories while I write my longer projects.

This has been a good week that has given me a feeling of accomplishment and has given me the boost I needed to feed the desire to write and to be more determined to accomplish the discipline I need to MAKE THE TIME TO WRITE!

When do you write?  Have you struggled with finding/making the time to write?

A Week Exploring Other Arts

I’m sorry this post is late.  It’s been a crazy week with a couple of really cool things happening.  First, Thursday (yes, the day I’m supposed to post here, which I usually do in the evenings — the best time for me to do writing of any kind), my oldest son and I went to hear Makoto Fujimura speak about his new book which will be coming out sometime this summer.  If you don’t know who Makoto Fujimura is, he is a very well-known abstract artist.  You can find out more about him at http://www.makotofujimura.com.  The work that he had on display on Thursday evening was from his work on “The Four Holy Gospels” that he did for the 400th anniversary of the King James version of the Bible.

His new book is called Culture Care and it is about our culture and how we need to care for it and not just complain about or live in fear of it.  He talks about how it is like working in a garden and he related how much Jesus spoke in his parables about things that were related to gardening (i.e.  sowing seeds).  He related that he does some gardening and how one day while he was gardening, he looked at the dirt in his hands and realized that it is “death” — death of plants, animals, insects, and from that “death” new life grows.  He was wonderful to listen to and to realize that he is a very deep thinker.

He also related a wonderful story about when he and his wife were first married and he was a struggling artist and she was in graduate school.  One Friday, he was at home trying to figure out what they were going to eat that weekend and his wife come home with a bouquet, and he got angry because she spent money on flowers when they could’ve used that $5 for food, and she reminded him that “they need to feed their souls too”.  He said that he never forgot that lesson, although he couldn’t tell you what they ate that weekend, and, he said, he also painted those flowers.

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Today there was an art show featuring local artists near our home and because our youngest son is showing a talent and interest in art, we took him to see the art and meet the artists.  There were only about ten artists there, but we saw oil paintings, acrylic paintings, watercolor paintings, pastel drawings and cartoons.  I have known two of the artists that were there for several years.  Our older two boys took some art lessons with them at a homeschool co-op years ago, so not only was it fun to go explore the work of local artists, it was fun to renew a couple of old acquaintences.

We were there for the last hour and fifteen minutes of the show and we were blessed to be able to speak with all of the artists there.  The gentleman who displayed his oil paintings actually is unable to use his hands, and he uses his mouth to paint beautiful photos.  There was an artist there who does mostly water colors, but also had a beautiful acrylic painting of a snowy owl, and he had some wonderful photos where he had some thing(s) hidden in some of his paintings and our son enjoyed looking for the hidden things.  I ended up purchasing two of his prints that I really liked.

We were very happy to spend some time with Sam Mylin and find out that he is looking to start an art club in the building the art show was held in, beginning in January.  He wants to teach kids, and our son would love to be a part of it, so we are praying that Sam will be able to have that art club.  Sam is a fun guy to be around.  He draws cartoons, but he knows a lot about other art mediums as well,

I also purchased a note card (which I have no intention of sending to anyone) of a beautiful snow scene that was done in pastels by one of the gentlemen at the show. I also hope to order some lovely watercolor paintings in Christmas ornaments by Irene Miller.  They were absolutely beautiful and would make great Christmas gifts as well!

It was a joy to be able to support local artists. Artists have a hard time earning a living and one of them that I spoke with today said, “Well, it’s not something you really need, and that makes it hard.”  But, thinking back on Makoto Fujimura’s lesson, “we need to feed our souls” and the beauty of art feeds our souls, so, in a way, we do need it.  If you know a local artist or want to support one of the ones I saw today, I encourage you to do so.  The names of the artists I saw today are:  David Howard Moore, Bill Puglisi, Gary G. Greene, Irene Miller, Sandra Roland, Sam and Kate Mylin, Stephen Leed and David Nolt.  I would imagine that you can find out more about any one of them simply by Googling their names.

Don’t just feed your physical body, but your soul as well.

Learning About Story from Real Life

Now that my mom is gaining strength and health, I have a little more time to think about the road we traveled since her surgery. As I have thought about it, I realized that it closely resembles the plot line of a story.

We began with a goal (story goal) — repairing the problems with her heart, then we hit an obstacle — her kidneys shut down. Then she had to begin dialysis, something she feared she’d end up on for the rest of her life and didn’t want to. She began to recuperate and was released to physical rehabilitation. Then, another obstacle — a bleeding issue sent her back to a hospital, where she began to improve and then–another obstacle — fluid build-up causing her to go into heart failure and ending up in the ICU. After a couple of days, improvement and back to a regular room. A couple more days and back to the rehab. Then, another obstacle — the bleeding returned and back to another hospital, a battle with a doctor (actually there had been a disagreement with a doctor before the fluid that caused the heart failure as well), and then, finally a good doctor who wanted to find the cause of the bleeding and fix it. Now, back to the rehab, and gaining strength and health and probably to be released in another week. (So, the story hasn’t really reached its conclusion yet).

But, all of that is just like a story plot line: you begin with a goal, and your character faces conflict and a disaster over and over again, scene by scene, until there finally comes a resolution and ending. This is what keeps readers reading, and of course, you need to create your characters well and bring them to life so that your reader can relate to them and care about them, because no matter how good your plotline is, if the reader can’t relate to or care about your character(s), they will either stop reading, or will end the book feeling unhappy and dissatisfied.

So, look at your life and the events that surround you. Can you find a plot line there? It may be the beginning of a good story.

Have You Ever Welcomed the Darkness?

     Here I am in the darkness again.  It’s become such a familiar place that today I feel comfortable here and don’t want to leave.  To leave would mean to go out into the light, and the light is where my pain comes from.  It’s what drives me to the darkness.

     I haven’t been this far into the darkness for a long time; to the place where I want to be left all alone; to the place where I am emotionally exhausted.  I take refuge in my room, but envision myself sitting alone in a dark corner of a cave.  It’s cold in here, but I feel safe, away from all the hands.

     The hands are in the light, always reaching for me — wanting.  They always want me to give:  time, attention, love; things from deep within me, but they don’t give much back in return and sooner or later, I end up here in the darkness, emotionally exhausted.

     I try to explain to them, two in particular, that they are hurting me.  I try to encourage them to look beyond themselves but my words seem to bounce right off, not getting through, having no effect.  Even my tears find no softness, apologies or compassion.

     I have cried out to God, begging and pleading with Him to open their eyes and hearts, to draw them to Himself, that they could learn to love each other, many times in the past.  I know He has heard every word, but even He chooses to do nothing.

     So, today, I didn’t even bother to pray.  I couldn’t find the strength or desire to send up another prayer for two hardened hearts.

     My heart is broken and, I suspect, the many tears I have shed will be followed by many more, and I am sure I will revisit this dark place of comfort again.

     Though I wish I could remain here, alone in the darkness a while longer, I will dig deep within, to the vast reserves of strength I believe the Lord placed within me a long time ago, and go forth to the light, and those groping hands, because I love them all with the love of the Lord and will continue to do so until the very last drop of that reserve strength is gone.

Life’s Curveballs

Before I write about what’s currently going on in my writing life, I just want to share one of life’s curveballs.  Sometimes I think I will never succeed in my writing because other life priorities keep eating my time.  I know what you’re thinking because I’ve heard it before — “make time for your writing; make your writing a priority.”  I know that’s important, but for me there are other things that are even more important, or I should say people who are more important — my husband, my children, my parents and in-laws — all of the people I love, and I am currently at that place in life where I am needed by my children and my parents and in-laws. 

Recently, my mother needed open-heart surgery and in the beginning, we were on a roller coaster ride as she would have a good day followed by a day with a setback, then another good day followed by a worse setback.  For three days I didn’t do much except cry and pray to ask God to heal my mother and not take her from me yet.  Going through all of that, I couldn’t have written anything if I had really wanted to.  My emotions and my brain were totally overwhelmed with Mom’s well-being.

I praise the Lord now that she is doing much better, though she is still in the hospital.  She is no longer in I.C.U. and she continues to grow stronger and healthier each day, but she still has a long way to go, and she tires very easily, and she still gets discouraged.  So I need to be there for her to encourage her, to pray for her, to be ready to care for her when she comes home, which I look forward to doing.

Therefore, if I continue to be missing from this site frequently, I hope you will understand.  One thing that will make it easier is the fact that I now have a laptop of my very own, so I will be able to take it with me almost anywhere I go so that I can try to squeeze some writing in during short breaks in the days.

I’m still studying by reading as much as I can and attending any writers’ conferences, workshops and my local writers’ group as much as possible.  I have my local writers’ group next Saturday and I’m looking into attending a one-day writers’ workshop in September and I will be attending one in October.  I am also studying the Christian Writer’s Guide for  2014 to see where I might be able to submit some writing.  I have been told, recently, that it’s a good idea to do some things like magazine articles, devotionals and short stories to submit to different publications to help generate a steady income, as writing books takes much more time until finished product and possible publication and pay.

Our last writers’ group taught us that we may want to consider publishing our own book because it’s very practical and affordable in today’s world with E-books and online publishing opportunities.  It is best to have an agent if you are publishing for a royalty publishing house.  The best way to get an agent is to meet them at a conference and pitch your book to them.  It is very difficult to find and get an agent, and could take you the rest of your life, so don’t wait to write until you find an agent.

What am I Doing Now?

Wow!  Last week just got away from me and I never got to post here.  Life has been busy as two weeks ago we celebrated my birthday and last weekend we celebrated our oldest son’s birthday.  This week we will be finishing up our school year, tomorrow I have a dental appointment, Wednesday my vehicle gets inspected and Friday and Saturday, we attend our local homeschool convention, so this week is busy as well.  I will post here as much as I can.

My next post will be about what I am currently doing to work on my journey to become a steadily published author.  I have already had three poems published in anthologies many years ago, and in early 2012, I co-wrote an article that was published in the online publication “The Old Schoolhouse” magazine.

Creativity in Troubled Times

I want to touch on a couple of ideas in this post.  This post was prompted by one of my followers, Pam, who left me some comments recently.  She commented on my last post about plot and structure and shared that she struggles with writing conflict because she doesn’t like to hurt her characters.  This is not something I have experienced, but I do understand it.  Although I do like my characters, I have never had a problem creating obstacles and conflict for them to deal with because I have not viewed them as real.  I see them as creations of my imagination and so I don’t struggle with giving them difficulties.  But, I do understand that it can be a difficult thing to do.  I suppose that it is extremely difficult for people, who have suffered in their own lives or witnessed the suffering of loved ones, to deliberately cause suffering for someone, even a story character, would be a difficult thing to do, and I thank you, Pam, for sharing this.  It is an obstacle that you will have to overcome in order to create good story plot lines and I pray for your success.

In addition to this, I had a difficult day recently, to the point where I felt empty, unable to create anything.  It frightened me and I was afraid that I would not be able to write any stories because I had no story ideas.  Then I prayed and I asked God to help me because He knows how much I have always dreamed of becoming a published author and even in my emptiness that dream was not gone.  A day later God blessed me with ideas for two stories, which I quickly wrote down.  

Writing is a difficult job and if something affects our level of creativity or our ability to create we can stare at a blank page or blank screen for hours without result and too many days like that can cause us to give up.  That is why it’s so important to read articles and stories in the subject and genres we want to write, and it’s important to make time to write everyday.  

For me the most important thing is knowing God and knowing that He loves me and He gave me the talent and ability to write, and He gave me the dream to write.  Therefore, I know that when I am struggling with writing, I can take that struggle and lay it at His feet and He will bless me, enable me and empower me so that I can write again.  I give thanks and praise to my God for the ideas He has given me and I continue to pray, daily, for his help and guidance on my writing journey.

Plot and Structure

The last workshop I attended at the writers’ conference was presented by Tracy Higley.  She did a fantastic, fast-paced presentation on plot and structure, based on examples by Christopher Vogler who wrote Writer’s Journey and Michael Hauge of storymastery.com.

Tracy explained that plot is critical to keep readers moving through your story because even if they like your characters, if nothing is happening, you’ll lose them.  You need to have a story goal for your protagonist and it can be either a concrete,visible goal or an abstract, inner goal.  She gave examples:  The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe — story goal — defeat the witch and The Wizard of Oz — to go home; abstract goal — learning to be content at home.

When the story goal is reached, the story is over. 

Your story needs an obstacle and conflict.  An obstacle — something solid that’s trying to keep your character from reaching his/her goal.  Conflict — needs to be significant.  Your character will have to go over, go through, or go under the obstacle to reach the goal.  Create story goal, obstacle, and conflict over and over again, scene by scene with each ending being a disaster/failure and use your character’s reaction to connect these.  Scene and chapter endings fade in the middle of the conflict or right after the disaster or right after a new goal is made.

This pattern should be followed for each book you write with an overarcing pattern for a trilogy or series.

Tracy suggested reading Writer’s Journey by Christopher Vogler (there are several editions available); Plot and Structure by James Scott Bell and check out Michael Hauge’s website and his book Hero’s Journey, which is available through his website:  http://www.storymastery.com/.

Tracy writes wonderful historical fiction and you can find her at:  http://tracyhigley.com/.

I love to read historical fiction, and though, I like to do research occasionally, I don’t think I’d want to write a genre that would require me to do extensive research for every book, so I’m glad we have authors like Tracy who do the research and write the wonderful historical stories.  I love to read so many types of fiction, I think that is why it was difficult to decide what type of fiction I should write.  That’s why I’m so glad I have a loving God that I can turn to for guidance.  I am also very blessed and thankful for a supportive husband and an encouraging oldest son.  I know the writer’s life can be isolated and that not every writer has supportive friends and family, so I hope that if you are one of those writers, you can visit my blog and find support and encouragement here.  Feel free to comment if you want some personal support and encouragement and I’ll be happy to be your support and encouragement.

Workshop and One-on-One

The workshop I want to share about today was presented by Mike Dellosso.  He is a Christian thriller/suspense writer.  He did a workshop on creating characters.

Mike said that creating authentic characters is important because the characters are the reason readers keep reading.  He said the antagonist should be someone the reader can identify with and can connect with.  The antagonist should also be someone the reader loves to hate but also has a connection with and, on a certain level, feels sorry for.

Mike said that giving characters heart and soul requires drawing much from your own experiences and using your desires, fears, etc.  

It’s important to give your character something to fight for.  i.e.:  Internal — self-worth, sanity, etc. or external — marriage, family, etc.

Mike explained POV (point of view):  First person — me telling the story — “I” (he suggested that this is the hardest to write); Second person — “You” (this is rare in fiction); and third person — “He said/she said”.  Third person limited — narrator telling from the narrator’s point of view (no thoughts, emotions, etc.), everything is base strictly on sight.  Third person omniscient — God View — can see inside the character’s head, heart and emotions — seeing inside the total person.  Deep third person is like first person but written as third using he or she instead of I but you are the main character.  Also, in deep third person you need to show who the speaker is through actions as much as possible (movement, body language).

POV “rules”:  One POV character per scene/chapter — no head hopping!  Stick to the POV!  The POV character never describes himself/herself unless he/she is looking at their reflection in a mirror or pool, unless they are getting dressed.  The POV character is the one whose five senses plus thinking/feeling — internal, the scene/chapter is focused on .  You cannot go into another character’s thoughts and senses.

Learn to observe people and take mental or real notes.

Describe enough of the character’s physical features so the reader can get a mental image but don’t overdo it.  Keep it minimal.  Describe females a little more than males because females show more variability in their looks than males.

Show action.  People move in real life:  body language, facial expressions, scratching, etc.

For dialogue learn to listen to people and take mental or real notes.  Listen to the way people talk and how conversation flows.  Long monologues are not normal.  It’s a lot of back and forth.  Characters should sound different because they have different personalities: a favorite word or phrase, accent, vocabulary, speed of speech.  Make their words count.

If you kill a character, someone needs to care, and it should either be the reader (preferably) or a character in the story, or both.

Bad guys can be redeemed at the end as long as it’s plausible enough that the reader will buy it.

Don’t use words if you don’t know what they mean.

Research whatever you don’t know; enough to get the idea and to make it authentic to your readers.

 

In addition to Mike’s workshop, I had signed up to have a one-on-one 15 minute session with Mike because I wanted to know a little more about writing suspense stories and because I had questions about POV.  (I had my one-on-one with Mike before his workshop). He was very helpful in tips and advice he offered and he was very encouraging.  I enjoyed meeting Mike and having the opportunity to discuss writing with him.

Mike Dellosso currently has seven books published:  six suspense/thriller books and one under the pseudonym Michael King.  He had six out of the seven books available in the conference books store.  Mike also has a great website.  Check out:  http://mikedellosso.com/