Metaphor Monday

I don’t have a book review to post today, so I thought I’d do something different.  Do you like metaphors?  Do you use metaphors in your writing?

Here are just a few metaphors that came across my mind today:

“He is a tall, thin reed of a man.”

“A book is a ship to sail a thousand seas.”

“Her tender kiss is sugary sweet.”

“His voice is music to my very soul.”

Feel free some of your own metaphors in the comments.

Flash Fiction Friday: Fairy Tale

Ametrine followed the sound of the voice.  Someone was singing in a voice so sweet, so musical it was almost mesmerizing.  She walked through the woods to a small clearing.

There Ametrine saw a beautiful girl with flowing waves of brown hair.  The girl had flawless sun gold skin.  She was dressed in a regal red gown.  She sat upon a rock by a small waterfall in a clear stream.  Birds flitted around her head.  Squirrels and rabbits sat by her feet.

Ametrine looked down at her own mottled skin.  She fingered the mole on her cheek, the bump on her nose.  A jealous rage filled her.  She ran back to her cottage.

A few minutes later Ametrine returned to find the girl still singing in the clearing.  Ametrine pulled the hood of her cloak over her head.  It helped to conceal her ugliness.  She approached the beautiful girl.

The girl looked up.  Her eyes met Ametrine’s.  She stopped singing.  She gasped.  She rose to her feet.

“Don’t be afraid,”  Ametrine cooed, looking into the girl’s emerald green eyes.  “I’ve come with a special treat for you.  I heard you singing like music to my ears.”

The young girl smiled.  Her cheeks turned pink.

“What is your name, child?”  Ametrine said.

“Isadora Calliwell.  I’m afraid I wandered too deep into the woods.  I’m not sure which way to go to get home.”

Ametrine had sucked in a breath at the girl’s name.  Surely she couldn’t be the Princess Calliwell of Lockridge Kingdom.  What on earth was she doing alone in the woods?  

A smile passed quickly over Ametrine’s lips.

“My dear, won’t you accept a bit of this chocolate cake?”

Isadora took the cake.  Chocolate was her favorite.  She began to eat.

When there was but a bit of cake left Isadora said, “I’m feeling quite sleepy.  I really should get back.”

Isadora started as Ametrine began to cackle and thrust off her cloak.  “You will not return, for now I shall steal your beauty.  I will return to Lockridge Kingdom to take your place.  You shall remain asleep in these woods forever.  The only way the spell can be broken is if a lonely old woodsman finds you and places a kiss upon your lips before ten years have passed.  There haven’t been any woodsmen around her for thirty years.”  She cackled once more.

Isadora fell asleep.  Ametrine placed the palm of her right hand against the palm of Isadora’s left hand.  She closed her eyes as the changes took place.  When she felt the change was complete, she opened her eyes.

Lying before her, Isadora now had the mottled skin, the mole on her cheek and the bump on her nose.

Ametrine stretched out her arm and saw the flawless sun gold skin.  She reached up and ran her hand through her new wavy, brown tresses.  She laughed.  It was not a cackle.  She sang a line and goosebumps appeared on her arms at the sound of her now musical voice.

She ran out of the woods toward Lockridge Kingdom.

Writer Interview

Today, I want to introduce you all to my writing friend, Julie Helms.  She was kind enough to answer some questions and allow me to post the interview here.

Me:  What piqued your initial interest in writing?  and How long have you been writing?

Julie:  I started writing only after I turned 40.  In high school, a teacher wrote on my progress report that got sent home:  “Julie can’t write, and she’ll never be able to.”  I can’t stress the amount of damage that comment did to me.  I actively resisted all writing after that through high school and college.

In college, I took a required English course taught by the VP of the university.  She called me into her office one day.  She wanted to know why on earth I was majoring in biology instead of something to do with writing.  She said I was a promising writer.  I just simply didn’t believe her…didn’t she get the memo?…the one that said I can’t write and will never be able to?

Two years later, a second professor called me out publicly during class in a lecture hall.  He had given the class a writing assignment that he felt was so difficult that he made it pass/fail only (it was to write a Greek comedy play).  So he was passing the assignments back and he announced my name and walked up to my desk (as a desperately shy person, I wanted to dig a hole, curl up, and die.)  He told the class my play was so well written there was no way he could just give me ‘pass.’  He gave me an A+.  Of all his classes, he said, I was the only one to get this.

You would think that after that I would embrace my inner muse and apply myself to the craft of this great calling.  But that careless comment from my high school teacher just screamed inside my head.  I sure showed my college prof…I threw my Greek play in the trash and I never attended another class in that course.

I wrote nothing for the next 20 years.

About ten years ago, I discovered Helium.com.  It was an online writing site that anyone could post to.  It didn’t matter if you could write or not, it was open to everyone.  Some little niggling in the back of my mind encouraged me to just give it a shot.  It sounded fun.  I posted under a pen name so I wouldn’t embarrass myself if my writing really sucked.  I was pleasantly surprised when I began to win some contests they held, and even more shocked when outside companies began purchasing my articles.  Helium went out of business about five years later.  In that time I had written 126 articles, stories, and poems.  About 20 of them were purchased for publication elsewhere.

Before they went under, Helium hired me as a freelance writer and editor for a different branch of their company that specifically offered professional writing services to other companies.  It wasn’t anything sexy, but it included writing for real estate companies, email coupon sites, and Sears and Kmart catalog descriptions.  It was during this time period that I discovered I had an aptitude for editing and really enjoyed it.  This branch of Helium (Content Source) was purchased by RR Donnelly, who I continue to work for to this day as a freelance editor.  My biggest customer is Amazon’s CreateSpace, their self-publishing arm.

To this point, I’ve sold only nonfiction, informational-type writing, which I don’t find particularly stimulating.  I want to write stories!

Me:  What types of things do you like to write?

Julie:  My focus now is on short stories and a novel-in-progress.

Me:  Do you study writing?

Julie:  I took my first writing course this fall from Gotham University online.  It was Fiction I.  I’m now taking a course from the same university called Novel II.

Me:  What do you consider important resources every writer should have?

Julie:  As basic as it sounds:  access to a dictionary and thesaurus!  I also love my most recent acquisition of The Emotion Thesaurus.

Me:  Do you like to read?

Julie:  Yes, I do now.  I was very late to discover the joy of reading.  Though I could read from the time I was supposed to in grade school, it was laborious and nothing close to fun.  I was in 9th grade when I read my first book for enjoyment.  It was like a light came on in my brain.  I then became a voracious reader.  Currently I read two to three novels per week.

Me:  Do you believe it is important to read in order to be a good writer?  Why or why not?

Julie:  Based on my history, I think the connection between reading and writing is obvious.  When my high school teacher said I couldn’t write, I probably really couldn’t…because for one thing I really hadn’t started reading yet, at least not easily.  In my fiction class this past fall, my teacher commented on my first submitted work that I had done three particular things very well.  I had to look up all three terms she used–I had no idea what they meant, so it’s pretty obvious I didn’t do any of it intentionally.  I told her this and she asked me if I liked 19th century writers.  I said I do.  She said I was modeling my writing techniques after them.  So I think the read/write connection is a strong one.

Me:  What is your favorite genre to read?  Why?

Julie:  Depends.  The vast majority of the reading I consume is commercial fiction.  I watch literally zero TV, so reading takes the place of that.  And most of the time I want to just read for entertainment.  It could be romance, crime drama, or psychological thrillers.

Occasionally, I will pull out something more along the lines of literary fiction.  That is when I’m in the mood to really enjoy the writing itself, the sound of the sentences–and I often do read it out loud.  This would be my 19th century writers…maybe Jane Austen, Edgar Allen Poe, or Nathanial Hawthorne.  I can read the first paragraph of Pride and Prejudice ten times and get the same thrill each time–the writing is to be slowly savored and appreciated.  As politically incorrect as it is to say this, I dislike much of what is touted as classics in 20th century literature.  I find them pretentious, self-absorbed, and frankly boring.  Just shoot me before making me read any more Faulkner, Hemingway, or JD Salinger.

Me:  Who is your favorite author?  Why?

Julie:  Commercial fiction:  Diana Gabaldon.  I love her Outlander series.  What a beautiful mix of romance and adventure with a little sci-fi thrown in.  I think she is a wonderful writer, though verbose at times.

Literary fiction:  Nathanial Hawthorne.  The man can set a scene like no one else.  You can feel the creepiness and ennui of The House of Seven Gables creep into your bones while you read.  you can feel the shame and hypocrisy close in on you in The Scarlet Letter and The Minister’s Black Veil.  Actually Poe does this very well, too.  The Fall of the House of Usher…best story ever!

Me: What was your favorite book as a child?  What did you like about it?

Julie:  Reading was such a chore for me, so ‘favorite’ would be overstating it, but I do remember liking The Borrowers when it was assigned in 6th grade.  I was fascinated by stories of fantasy lands.

Me:  When and where do you write?

Julie:  Usually in my recliner in the sitting area of my bedroom.  I am nothing if not a creature of comfort, plus it is the only place in my house that I can escape all other humans for a time.  I do everything on computer, no writing in notebooks.

Me:  Do you have an established writing routine?

Julie:  No, but I need to.  Unfortunately, life keeps getting in the way.  I write in fits and spurts, but I would like to be disciplined and intentional about it.

Me:  Do you like to listen to music when you write?  If so, what type of music?

Julie:  I absolutely cannot listen to music when I write.  I also can’t have much activity going on around me–no TV, conversation, etc.  Participating in our Scribes Oasis writing group is really the only time I write with people in my vicinity, since I am a big one for talking through problems out loud, and that’s embarrassing to do with witnesses!

Me:  Are you part of any writers’ groups?

Julie:  Scribes Oasis and an online writing class I take through Gotham University that functions as a writing group in some ways (eg. interaction with others, critiquing).

Me:  Do you think it’s important to be part of a writers’ group?  If so, why?

Julie:  I think it is very helpful.  I’ve used my group to brainstorm ideas when I was stuck and to get feedback on what I’ve written.  I think the feedback is especially important so you can see what’s working and what isn’t.

Me:  Have you ever written anything that was published?

Julie:  When I wrote for Helium.com I sold dozens of articles, mostly short nonfiction, for publication usually online.  Topics varied from info about insects or farm animals, to military history, to biblical concepts.  I have contributed to a coffee table book about cats, as a ghost writer.  And I’ve had a poem and autobiographical account stolen and printed online without permission–does that count as publication?  🙂

Me:  Do you have a blog that is related to your writing?  If so, what is your blog address?

Julie:  Not at this time.

Me:  Do you think it is important for a writer to establish an online presence?  Are you on any social media?

Julie:  It probably is, but this would be an area that I know little about and need to learn more.  I use some social media but not yet related to my writing.

Well, Julie, it’s been a pleasure chatting with you and learning about your writing journey.  I certainly wish you the best as you continue to write, and hope to read your novel after publication.

Top Ten Tuesday

Here is my first Top Ten Tuesday post, and I thought I’d share 10 of my favorite songs of all time from #10 down to the #1.  (Yes, these could change as more songs come up in future years, but these are my current all time faves.)

Mystery Mountain Four by Marie Grace

I received a free eBook copy of Mystery Mountain Four by Marie Grace to review for BookLook Blogger.

Book Description

Marie Grace wows readers with the fourth novel in her Mystery Mountain series. In the small town of Raincroft, the bonds of love and family are stronger than all outside or dangerous influences and adventures while romance blossoms between two unlikely people. Through determination and strength, Grace’s engaging characters find the courage to overcome adversity.

I have not read the first three books in this series and therefore, I was not familiar with the characters or the setting and the author did not offer any background that would help a reader who didn’t read the previous books.

I think Marie Grace has some great story ideas.  She has many plot ideas and character ideas.  The problem I found was that there were too many characters and too many plots in this one book.  I know this is a continuation of three previous books but I think it would’ve worked better if she had separated some of the characters and plot lines into the separate books in the series.  I believe that would make the story easier to follow.

In addition, it would have given the author more time and space to create a solid setting with understandable description.  She also would have been able to put more time and detail into creating her characters so that they would be deeper and more enjoyable.

As it is, I felt like the story jumped around too much.  Also, there didn’t seem to be enough time spent on creating the conflicts in the stories and the author often switched back and forth between present and past tense.  A couple of her characters spoke a dialect that the author attempted to write, which I found distracting and annoying.  I also found contradictions in some of her characters that seemed out of place.  There were also some places where she switched point of view in the same paragraph or scene, even though she had page breaks and chapters.  The page breaks and chapters seemed to transition to a different location or story line.

In this book, out of the many characters that were part of the story, I felt like I only really got to know two of them fairly well and I found their romance cute but juvenile.

I believe Marie Grace has great ideas for a great series here, but I would highly recommend that she go back and break it apart and put fewer characters and conflicts into each story; to focus on not more than four main characters and maybe four conflicts per book.  I believe if she did that and really developed those four main characters and the conflicts, her stories would be much more readable and enjoyable.  I also suggest that she find an interesting way to include the information as to why a select few of the characters seem to have speech issues without trying to write their issues in their dialogue.

There didn’t seem to be a single connecting theme throughout the book either.  It seemed that there were many themes that Marie Grace addressed and there were times when the message(s) she wanted to get across came across preachy.  Also, I didn’t feel like there was any real resolution to any of the plot lines in the story by the end of the book, which was also disappointing.  I understand she wanted to have some loose ends to tease her readers with in hopes they would want to read the next book in the series, but with all of the plot lines she had, I think it would have left me feeling better about the book if one or two of the plot conflicts had come to clear resolution by the end of the book.

In conclusion, I like Marie Grace’s story line ideas and the characters I was able to get a grip on.  However, I found the book difficult to read and follow.  I would recommend this book to the Young Adult audience but feel it’s too juvenile for the adult audience written as it is.  If Marie Grace was to go back and do a bit of editing and break the story and flesh out her characters and add more meat to the conflicts for each book of the series, I believe it would be a much better, stronger series that would definitely be interesting and enjoyable for adults.  I see a lot of potential in these stories.

Flash Fiction Friday: Stranded

The car stalled, then shut off.  I drifted to the shoulder.  I whispered a prayer as I turned the key.  The engine whined but wouldn’t turn over.

A car pulled up in front of me.  A tall man climbed out.  He began to approach.  I hit the door locks.  My heart pounded.  The sun was setting but he still wore sunglasses.  I couldn’t see his eyes.

I could almost hear the gravel crunching under his feet.  His upper body was well defined in his black t-shirt.  Should I crack my window a bit?

Then he was there, right outside my car door.  He looked at me through the window.  I held up my cell phone.  “I’ll be okay.  I’ve called someone,” I said.

“Well, if you pop the hood, I’d be happy to take a look.”  He smiled, exposing deep dimples.  He took off his sunglasses.  I looked into the bluest eyes I’d ever seen.

Why do I have to live in a world where I have to be so vigilant?

I smiled, tore my eyes from his and popped the hood.

Kissed By a Cowboy by Debra Clopton

I received a free ebook copy of this book to review for BookLook Blogger.

Cassidy Starr returns to the only place she has ever felt happy and loved in her life.  She has suffered too many broken relationships in her life and so decides to live a simple, peaceful life alone in Wishing Springs.  However, her neighbor, handsome cowboy, Jarrod Monahan, may challenge those plans.

This is the first book I have ever read by Debra Clopton, and it is evidently part of a series known as the “Four of Hearts Romance” series.  I have always enjoyed cowboy romances and this book did not disappoint me.  I love this story.  Ms. Clopton did an excellent job creating her characters.  Not only did I fall in love with and care about what happened to Cassidy and Jarrod, but all of the townspeople captured my interest and my heart as well.  The camaraderie between Jarrod and his brothers is an added pleasure to the story.

There was also a mystery in the story that needs to be solved.  This adds a bit of danger and suspense to the story.  Between the blossoming romances and this mystery I couldn’t put the book down.  The pace of the story was well written, the plot was interesting and kept moving and the characters were lovable.

The only disappointment I experienced was the ending.  I felt that Ms. Clopton rushed the ending a bit.  I think if she would have written one more chapter, included a bit more detail and included the townspeople a bit more since they had been key figures in the story up to that point, it would have been a better, richer ending, and would’ve have left me completely satisfied, instead of slightly disappointed.

I will, most likely, read this story again someday, just because I loved the characters so much.  I would also highly recommend this story to anyone who loves cowboy romances or just a good romance, or to anyone who loves to get a chuckle out of a good small town story.

Flash Fiction Friday: Fairy Princess

She captured my attention in an instant.  She was unlike anyone I had ever met before.

She flitted about on tiptoe.  She greeted complete strangers with hugs.  Sweetness, kindness and gentleness radiated from her.  Innocence surrounded her.  In a matter of moments she was gone from sight.

She still haunts my thoughts.  I believe I met a Fairy Princess today.

Faeries/Fairies — Good or Bad

Last Thursday I got into a discussion about faeries with a writing friend.  I have always envisioned faeries as good, kind and friendly.  My friend, however, said that they were written about in Literature, in Victorian times, as good, kind and friendly, but that originally they were mean, ugly and evil.

That piece of information disturbed me because I have an idea for some short fiction pieces that involve a good, kind, friendly fairy.  My friend said that I could still create a fairy like that if I wanted to.

So last night I did a little research, for about two-and-a-half hours, and visited six different websites with information about the history of faeries/fairies.

Let’s start with the spelling —  faerie is the original spelling which derived from “Fe erie”, meaning the enchantment of the Fees, while Fe is derived from Fay, which is itself derived from Fatae, or the Fates.

The modern term “fairy” is linked to fairy tales, which in their modern form have little to do with actual faeries.

For the rest of this post, I will use the modern, more common spelling “fairy”.

Fairies are mythical creatures.  The myths began in Europe and eventually made their way to the United States and other countries.

According to the myths, not all fairies are bad, nor are all fairies good.  A common belief is that fairies are fallen angels who are not good enough for heaven nor bad enough for Hell.

Some of the myths talk about good, helpful fairies who interact with humans and help them around the house with things like sweeping and making bread rise.  It is said that they do not want humans to thank them and that they can be temperamental.  That is why people refer to them as “the little folk”, “the fair folk”, “the good neighbors”, etc.  People called them these things in order to avoid attracting their attention and to avoid insulting them.

There are two types of fairies — The Trooping Fairies and the Solitary Fairies.  The Trooping Fairies are the ones who don’t mind associating with humans a bit.  The Solitary Fairies prefer to be left alone.

All fairies have the power to bestow continual good fortune or continual bad luck upon humans, which is why humans try to avoid attracting their attention or insulting them.

To summarize, in all that I have read, there is information to support that there are both good and bad fairies.

Finally, since fairies are fictional characters, and I am a fiction writer, and since there is information to support both good and bad fairies, I feel quite comfortable writing some short fiction that includes at least one good fairy.  (You may even see some of my short fiction with the good fairy right here on this blog.)

*Note:  The information in Italics was taken from http://www.medbherenn.com/faerie-lore.html, one of the websites I visited during my research.